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Grape Crush
I hear marshmellows don't grow on trees, how sad.
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Interesting. I'm a huge fan of Outlast, and am in the process of writing a pony fic of my own based around it. I've read only one other story based around the game, and it was of unfortunately poor quality. This however, looks promising, and I'm eager to see where this goes.
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Thank you for your kind words. I was a little bit scared to post on this subject, mostly because I thought I was the only one to do it. So I tried to make it the best I could, to ensure a good standpoint on this crossover.
If you can manage to pull off that creepy bastard with the bandaged eyes, I'm sold.
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I'm going to follow the game as closely as possible, while figuring out ways to ponify it. So, hopefully in some way I can pull him off, haha.
Not bad dude I like how your doing this by first person view and not narrating,also that you put in your own original stuff I side of this even if it following the same script as the game just remember to add your own things in the story.
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Yeah, I added a little bit different architecture to the building itself, plus a little more background information as to why Rainbow Dash is going there in the first place. I will add content throughout the story, so don't fret. Enjoy!
Damn you...DAMN YOU!!
The image of Dash gettin' raped by Mr. Gluskon is now burned into my brain, you son of a bitch!!
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Heh, we'll cross that road when we get there... Since Dashie is my favorite, I probably won't make her go through it too badly... But who am I to change such a wonderful game?
I am seriously looking forward to this. Though I haven't played the game myself, sadly, I've watched at least five different playthroughs of it, and I am practically shivering at what could be done here. Please, whatever you do, don't. Fuck up. The guy. With the bandages.
This seems interesting so far, if not a bit rushed. Could work on the story's sudden setting changes, too much happened in a chapter this short.
I found a few lowercase 'I' here and there, you may want to fix that.
Go on please, continue!
-Zeph
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Thank you for your kind words! I apologize for the "rushed" feeling, but it is only the introduction, the real chapters are probably going to be 4,000-5,000 words.
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Join the club haha. What is with you people and the creepy guy with the bandages? No matter, I will try my best at perfecting him.
4779757 That guy was so incredibly crafted! He was creepy for almost no discernable reason!
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Very well!
However, don't forget an important thing:
Break the story into chapters you would see in gameplay vids, I'm thinking about Markiplier now. What I mean is that those 4-5k words still can be rushed, so watch how much you tell in a single chapter.
-Zeph
Dude. Outlast is the shit.
I want more.
you have my attention, prey continue
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Were you creeping in my window? Because holy shit, that's who I was going to base the chapters off of...
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Your wish is my command!
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Oh please, I'm everywhere!
Nevertheless, Markiplier the best Youtuber, he is my absolute favorite! So it was just a lucky coincident... or was it?...
for a second i thought this was a batman crossover
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Um... Ok... I have no idea how you got Batman out of this, but everyone sees stuff different!
simple
Oucast: Canterlot Asylum
Batman Arkham Asylum
Outlast + Rainbow = NO
Just the image of dashie being on the table by "The groom" makes my skin crawl.
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OC Characters are overated. Dashie is fearless and loyal to her jobs. In my opinion, she was the best pony for the job. I'm sorry if my choice was bad...
YES I APROOVE
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Haha, working on chapter one right now!
4781850 Oh god!!!!!
Wheres the brain bleach for the image of that scene when you need it!!!!!
It's making me think of that scene from Cupcakes HD I saw back when I didn't even know what it was was or the significance of it!
Biggest mistake ever watching it!!!
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But I doubt that scene would be in it since Dash is female, unless the author decided to gender bent the groom.
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Yeah, that is what is most confusing about doing this. The whole gender swap. But, that would make it interesting seeing it from the other side, would it not?
Ummm... I like Outlast and all, but why did it have to be Dashie?! Now if it was Pinkie pie, she could get through this in a snap!
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Well, I personally love Dashie. Pinkie... Well she doesn't show fear, and I'm not saying Dashie does either, but she can at least show bits and pieces of it. And fear is what I'm trying to accomplish... Pinkie would ruin the whole experience in my opinion.
I remember having a couple friends over to watch something on Netflix, and the service was screwing up. I had Outlast on the ps4, and so we took turns playing it.
It was a long night. A long night indeed.
But what's there to life without scaring the shit out of yourselves and maybe getting the neighbors to call the cops, eh? Boring, that's what. Good job on setting up, although the ominous atmosphere from the game isn't there, that would be my complaint.
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Oh,ok. I just suggested that cause I thought it would be cool.
My eyes aren't decieving me! The first Outlast story on the site! You have my utmost respect!
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Heh... Yeah, I apologize for that, but for me it's hard to get "feels" out, not sure why.
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Thank you!
Here you go everypony.
Enjoy the madness that is Markiplier.
Whoa...I'm not sure which one scares me more right now, watching videos of Markiplier and PewDiePie playing Outlast, or reading this story. I will say this, you are doing one hell of a job keeping up with the exact events that happen in the game, and that's something many writers can't do. I really enjoyed reading this chapter and can't WAIT to read the next one!
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Wow... I was actually worried I didn't get the creepy factor down... Thank you so much!
I'm pretty sure it was Miles screaming in the game.
Just a small correction.
Wonderful, beautiful!
I can almost hear Markiplier screaming!
I think the pacing of chapters is the best one, if actually based on Mark's gameplay. The description of the scenes makes me remember both his videos and imagine the story with Dash too! And the appearance of the priest, heheh!
Fantastic, go on, go on!
When will we get the next chapter?
-Zeph
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Working on it!
Outlast + scp containment beach = best horror game ever.
4833468 I agree with you. You can just hear the screaming *faded screams* haha, oh we are really bucked up ponies.
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Whoa, all these likes just blew up in my face. Thanks for reminding me to get off my ass and write something, haha.
5078085 Your… welcome
Fascinating idea. Writing could use work, but what fanfiction doesn't have the little goof-up here and there?
Anyways, add the new Horror tag, mate. Get some horror fanatics reading this.
RIP.
A'right, I read it and I have my two cents for it!
The chapter's pacing is good, it is very close to how the actual game was paced, so you did a great job with that!
However, the lack of editors is visible, there are many it's in it which should be its.
Besides that, the sentences are running too long and have too many commas, but those can be easily fixed.
So, the chapter is good but needs a mandatory proofreading! That is all!
Let's continue on, how about we see the entire 'playthrough'?
Or maybe you should bring in a twist?..
-Zeph
Man I started tracking this a few months ago, never expected it to update. I applaud you!
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Well, to be entirely honest I never thought I'd continue it either! But I'm glad I did! It helps to know people still read it after 3 years!