Shining Armour plunges the depths of the Canterlot sewers for the remnants of the Changeling swarm; unaware that he holds the attention of their queen.
This possiblely one of the best Chrysalis clopfics I've ever read. Her character in regards to her feelings for Shining, both during and after coitus, really fleshed her out.
4681601 I do agree with this, Chrysalis to me always seemed to actually seek out Shining armor because he had a lot of love to give, not just because of the wedding being a perfect time to invade (which it was)
That comma behind 'alone's is incorrect.
You should have a comma between 'once more' and 'the changeling'.
Take that "'s" off of "lover's", it shouldn't be there.
Haha, pony jokes.
Also, I didn't realise this was a clopfic until the second chapter. So I'm outty, yo.
This possiblely one of the best Chrysalis clopfics I've ever read. Her character in regards to her feelings for Shining, both during and after coitus, really fleshed her out.
4681601
I do agree with this, Chrysalis to me always seemed to actually seek out Shining armor because he had a lot of love to give, not just because of the wedding being a perfect time to invade (which it was)