All right... I have been reading the whole first story and I absolutly,possitivly, need to say this.

"HOLY FUCKING CRAP." Yes that was quite vugur but was worth it. Your first story is absolutly magnificent. The dialauge was great (few spelling errors here and there though...)
And the reactions were not was I was thinking about. But still awesome. I was shocked of how little views and thumbs you have. And I totaly suport you to continue this.

By the sake of my sanity though work on Celestias dialauge. It just seens sooooo... clihé the characters speech felt right. I specificaly loved how Discord was illistrated. Goofy yet wise... in some weird way...

Finaly, Good luck and keep it up!

*Ahem* Now then. LET THE READ BEGIN!

4742850 O_o wow...I don't know what to say. This is the most praise I received for my stories. I understand what you mean about Celestia's dialogue, but she is still mostly normal during the past points of the story. I honestly didn't think my writing was all that good. I guess I'm just too humble. Thanks for the motivation though! I'll continue to do my best, and try as hard as I can to improve