@Warwolf...

While your story premise/style/theme(s) may not be my cup of tea {no malice intended, just personal opinion/preferences}, your Technical Writing (spelling, grammar, format, etc.) and your high word count earns you a Like from me on those two (always important) literary writing factors.

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Thanks. ...I think. Keep an eye out. There's more to come in this story.

I Need More

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More will be coming in the days and weeks ahead.

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It was a compliment.

Regardless of personal story preference, I always applaud (&/or Like) good Technical Writing and a hearty Word Count per chapter.

Whether I read later chapters, perhaps if the timing is good and I happen to see it in the Updates List. As I said, not my cup of tea for fan-fictions (thus not actively Favorite-tracking).

As usual, a very well written grammatically and high word count story. As expected, Warwolf.

That said...

-Bops Discord-

No touchy with the dimensional fabric of the universe! Not unless you're a user of the Second True Magic! Otherwise, it guarentees Bad Things to happen! And yes, the Capitals are Necessary!

IC Shenanigans aside, I do look forwards to moar stuff from you. Not just this, the rest of your stuff as well.

Humm.
Combine that they both like sci-fi with the description of what is attacking the old world.

Sounds like Cylons to me.

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You're surprisingly close. Off by a year and series. But the Cylon thing would be a good guess.

Are we talking gen1 cylones or the newer ones? That would give me a clue as to what to look at.

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Like I said, you're not thinking of the right series. In other words, while Battlestar Galactia wasn't a bad guess, you're a year short and a country off.

Finally got around to this one. It felt a bit choppy at the start, but I got into it once the sex scene was over. (I find myself skimming over most sex scenes I read regardless of quality recently.)

The MUCK Twilight's discomfort at the premise of the story mirrors mine. You might have an uphill battle to convince me that Celestia would in fact punish Twilight in such a way (especially with that speech in the end I mean Jesus), or that every one of Twilight's friends (except Spike) would just let it happen like that. I'm still holding out hope for a reconciliation down the line. I'll keep watching this because of the good times we had on the MUCK.

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Hehehehe. The muck version is inspired by this version. However, more will be explained as we go. Will there be a reconciliation?

Only way to find out is to watch and read on!

lovin it

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Happy to hear it. Anything in particular you liked or disliked? I'm always looking for constructive criticism.

I liked it but really? Yugure Kirameku? really?

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What?

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Seriously, what's wrong with the name?

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It's more of I bothered to use a translator on the names

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Yeah so? It's Twilight Sparkle in Japanese. What's wrong with that? So got any critique for the story?