Needs an anthro tag.

4599062 They aren't anthros. They're ponies.

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Then why does Twilight cover her boobs?

From her soft breasts to the outline of her womanhood with quite wide hips, she was a figure of pure beauty. "Good afternoon Flash" she giggled at him, a half-full wine glass cupped in both her hooves, her front limbs covering her boobs.

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Because they're human? If so, needs a human tag.

Technically equines have their mammary glands ("breasts" in pop culture) located near their groins - all mammals have mammary glands - and i've seen them referred to as "crotchboobs" in MLP R34 artwork. But i'll change it now anyway to remove the boobies - mistake on my part for not clarifying it.

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I don't know about this...

~DustyPwny

4620182 What do you mean by "Detail"? It would be nice if you could elaborate ^^

4604182 If I'm honest I did feel that bit was a teeny bit rushed. Part 3 shouldn't have any similar issues.

I'm hopefully going to have the third part up by the middle of next week. In the meantime, thanks to everyone for leaving comments. I really appreciate constructive feedback on my stories (pointing out silly errors especially) so if you've read this, please let me know what you think

she imagined how handsome he must look while naked.

Umm... I thought you said they were ponies... don’t they walk around naked all the time anyways? Oh... whatever...