5736724 most stories I read give high praise to humans having ponies as good parents. I decided that even ponies who are adopted parents can have mistakes and also have a bad relationship with their children too.
i like the story but can you please explain how the humans came slaves and what era is the technology like (please tell me that their technology is very similar to the show with one or two expectations)
(please this is my opinion and my not trying to have go at you but just point something out)
because a lot people always forgets that we humans are masters at building, creating and destroying. because we do not relay on ability, we always relay on are head or crate something to get around problems. but if you say the equestria is all modern like our world and it was all made by equestrians your basically saying that every human on equestria as no purpose and all are literally not needed at all a.k.a the human race could go extinct and no will miss them.
*example* ponies will have no need for modern weapons because they mainly relay on magic, so it is only logical that they will not update their weapons as often. but we human are always updating new technology so it makes sense that the human will have better weapons than the ponies [humans use modern rifles and pistols] = [ponies use civil war or older rifles and pistols]
the flight-suits the human tempers were using you could say that it was their creation or designed by them because i just not see what use would a pony, griffin... or any other equestrian fucker would have use for it, i can only just see Humans using Flight-suit, no-one else.
and will say this again his is my opinion and my not trying to have go at you but just point something out
5737147 your right, ponies making human like technologies that only humans might use more then Equestrians is strange, but I want readers to keep wondering and be more interactive in commenting in the story, because that makes explaining the whole situation about humans into slaves and other things questionable will all be answered in the later chapters piece by piece. I am sorry if some of the chapters confuse you, but I want readers to keep guessing and have their own ideas and theories about my story. So thank you for your comment and I will give some small explanations in the next chapter.
5737334 could make human a little bit of a fighting chants if their was a battle or something like humans made a suit of armor that cancels out all magic around it making all equestrains that have magic in their blood very weak. = just an idea
PUUUHHHLLEEEESSSEEE Continue writing this story, it is well made and well thought. The element of adding AC: Unity into the mix was great and it comes together well. Nuff said
Wow, Saint and Artemis really have trouble with their mothers and Mike is screwed if Saint finds out about him. Hope the next chapter comes soon.
5736724 most stories I read give high praise to humans having ponies as good parents. I decided that even ponies who are adopted parents can have mistakes and also have a bad relationship with their children too.
i like the story but can you please explain how the humans came slaves and what era is the technology like (please tell me that their technology is very similar to the show with one or two expectations)
(please this is my opinion and my not trying to have go at you but just point something out)
because a lot people always forgets that we humans are masters at building, creating and destroying. because we do not relay on ability, we always relay on are head or crate something to get around problems. but if you say the equestria is all modern like our world and it was all made by equestrians your basically saying that every human on equestria as no purpose and all are literally not needed at all a.k.a the human race could go extinct and no will miss them.
*example*
ponies will have no need for modern weapons because they mainly relay on magic, so it is only logical that they will not update their weapons as often. but we human are always updating new technology so it makes sense that the human will have better weapons than the ponies [humans use modern rifles and pistols] = [ponies use civil war or older rifles and pistols]
the flight-suits the human tempers were using you could say that it was their creation or designed by them because i just not see what use would a pony, griffin... or any other equestrian fucker would have use for it, i can only just see Humans using Flight-suit, no-one else.
and will say this again his is my opinion and my not trying to have go at you but just point something out
5737147 your right, ponies making human like technologies that only humans might use more then Equestrians is strange, but I want readers to keep wondering and be more interactive in commenting in the story, because that makes explaining the whole situation about humans into slaves and other things questionable will all be answered in the later chapters piece by piece. I am sorry if some of the chapters confuse you, but I want readers to keep guessing and have their own ideas and theories about my story. So thank you for your comment and I will give some small explanations in the next chapter.
5737334 could make human a little bit of a fighting chants if their was a battle or something
like humans made a suit of armor that cancels out all magic around it making all equestrains that have magic in their blood very weak. = just an idea
PUUUHHHLLEEEESSSEEE
Continue writing this story, it is well made and well thought. The element of adding AC: Unity into the mix was great and it comes together well.
Nuff said