A tale involving The young Colt, Rumble, and one of his two foal-sitters, Cloudchaser, While Thunderlane has gone on vacation to Tanzebra, Zecora's home
Rumble then went upstairs to lay down on his foal-sitter's bed, waiting for Cloudchaser. The colt then went under the covers, because he thought it felt comfortable with the soft covers over him. He then herd footsteps, that had to be Cloudchaser. he then sat up and the door opened to see Cloudchaser in a Shadowbolt costume Rights for this image go to UndeadHyena115 at Deviantart
"Don't worry, Rumble. Fluttershy told me about this place, and they give everything away for free." Said Cloudchaser. She turned off the humidifier, and carried Rumble on her back, then she exited the steam room. She saw The two sisters, and said "Thanks for having us over."
Then how the hell do Aloe and Lotus make any... never mind...
Maybe writing to music isn't your thing, because I loved the first two chapters.
This one seems like you were writing it with a knife to your throat....
I should know about the music thing, Never write to fast paced music. I tried writing to this, and I ended up deleting the chapter.
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Rumble then went upstairs to lay down on his foal-sitter's bed, waiting for Cloudchaser. The colt then went under the covers, because he thought it felt comfortable with the soft covers over him. He then herd footsteps, that had to be Cloudchaser. he then sat up and the door opened to see Cloudchaser in a Shadowbolt costume
Rights for this image go to UndeadHyena115 at Deviantart
What was the picture for that scene?
Then how the hell do Aloe and Lotus make any... never mind...