Tired of Celestia’s pony utopia, Twilight’s power finally goes to her head as she decides to try to conquer Ponyville. She just needs a little help to get her started.
Nice so far. I'm hoping to see an increasingly high death count, and possibly for Twilight to become increasingly shameless or even public with her actions over time.
4552793 You're right, I need to increase the frequency of deaths. I guess I feared getting campy, but you're right I need to stop giving everyone a long farewell tour.
Nice so far. I'm hoping to see an increasingly high death count, and possibly for Twilight to become increasingly shameless or even public with her actions over time.
4552793 You're right, I need to increase the frequency of deaths. I guess I feared getting campy, but you're right I need to stop giving everyone a long farewell tour.
;.; what about derpy!
also this sounds very painful :( i feel bad for trixie
4581748 Thank god you didn't see my first draft of this story.
I am sensitive to your feelings. Maybe I shouldn't spell out when characters are in pain. Then, I can leave it up to the reader's interpretation.