Гром на Твилигхт

by FalloutFilly

The Storm Loves The Dusk

Author's Note:

Note: This takes place after season four episode 24 but before 25/26, which in this story it never happens, but Twilight did unlock the chest with her key, which was the original letter of friendship she sent Celestia. (Don't worry, there is a copy.) Also I know Lieutenant is not the highest rank, he just prefers "Lieutenant Thunder" opposed to "General ThunderShock" as I would, plus I know there is a 1st and 2nd Lieutenant, but in Equestria there is only one combined rank.

Also, when the term "Twilight's Personal Blanket" is mentioned it means this position: his forelegs wrapped around hers and her holding his forelegs with hers and resting her head on the inside of his shoulder and her rear legs wrapped around his and finally his wings wrapped around her, covering her almost completely from the top of her cutie mark up to her neck. So when you hear that term it means that position. She hasn't officially used it yet, she will soon though.

Rarity and Fluttershy walked in to the library, Rarity to get her weekly fashion history book, Fluttershy to get her weekly small animals book.

"Twilight? Do you have our weekly bo..... Oh, my." Rarity said seeing Twilight and Thunder in the same position they fell asleep in. Twilight heard Rarity and slowly regained her alertness, when she was about to move she felt a large wing brush against her side causing her to giggle. She used her magic to gently move his wings, trying not to wake him up. Once Twilight was free she walked over to the two.

"Is it Thursday already?" Twilight asked, not paying any mind to what Rarity and Fluttershy just saw.

"Indeed it is. May I ask what were you two doing?" Rarity said looking at the huge stallion laying in front of the still burning fireplace.

"Nothing, it was going to rain and he can't fly in the rain. Before you ask he was hit by lightning so he has a fear about it. Look." Twilight said pointing to Thunders right wing. Both Fluttershy and Rarity winced at the huge, deep scar behind his wing.

"So you two didn't...." Rarity started to say, but was quickly cut off by Twilight.

"No. We did fool around a little though, turns out we are, well, in love." Twilight said with a bright blush on her face.

"You read to many romances, darling. But you seem like it's working so I have no objections." Rarity said with a semi-smug look on her face.

"So you two wanted your books?" Twilight said walking back to where she kept the books.

"Yes, that we did." Rarity said despite the rapid change of subject. Twilight, Rarity, and Fluttershy walked back and began going through and reading various books. After a few minutes Thunder woke up only not to have Twilight by him, but he heard movement in the other room so he got up quietly and went over to where he heard the noise. He saw Twilight facing away from him, but didn't see Fluttershy and Rarity, he got close behind her, leaned in towards her and gently, but firmly, nibbled on her neck. She had no idea he was there so she squealed in surprise, Fluttershy got a worried look, while Rarity got an mother-protecting-her-cubs one. Thunder released and laughed a little getting close to her ear.

"Morning, sunshine." He whispered. Twilight gently bucked him in the leg.

"Very funny, Thunder." She said turning towards him and giving him a soft kiss.

"Oh, hello girls." He said noticing Rarity and Fluttershy. "Twilly, didn't mention you were coming over." He said.

"Oh, yeah, sorry, they come by every week to get a certain book. I forgot it was Wednesday yesterday or I would have told you." Twilight said embarrassed.

"Well it's all right, supposing they don't mind this." He said giving Twilight a firm and long kiss, she giggled a little at first, but generously returned the kiss.

"Ahem." Rarity cleared her throat, trying to get their attention. Twilight and Thunder ignored it, lost in each others passion. Even Twilight's rear leg went up as she leaned in closer. After they had to breathe they released, only to rest their foreheads on each other, Twilight bit her lower lip again. Rarity saw this, and out of slight jealousy, cleared her throat louder.

"We'll finish this later." Twilight whispered, but loud enough for the others to hear.

"Alright, I'm holding you to that." Thunder said kissing her once again before walking towards the couch and rested, partly worn out from Twilight's skill, but also so he could just look at her.

"Yes, well, it's seems you two share a generously passionate relationship." Rarity said.

"Yep." Thunder shouted across the room. Twilight smiled and gave him a wink. Twilight, Fluttershy, and Rarity continued on, one of them occasionally looking at Thunder, who was looking love-struck at Twilight every time. When Twilight and Fluttershy weren't paying attention Rarity walked over to Thunder.

"You really like her huh?" She started.

"Yeah, I do." He said, not taking his eyes off Twilight.

"Might I ask how?" Rarity inquired, going from jealous to caring.

"Well, when she became Celestia's student I saw nothing more than another Unicorn, but as she progressed I felt something different, and when Celestia, Luna, and Cadence were talking about her becoming an Alicorn I didn't pay attention, but when she did I felt something entirely different. Twilight was a little quicker though, when she became Celestia's student the first time she saw me she fell in love, just another typical crush though, nothing more, but once she was an Alicorn she still held on to those feelings, and yesterday we finally told each other, and where we are now, well, I wouldn't have it any other way, I'm sure she wouldn't either." Thunder told the story, he was not afraid to, in fact he was proud to.

Rarity had a small tear in her eye, granted she was somewhat of a drama queen, so that was like gasoline to fire.

"Well then, you treat her good or I'll scratch your eyes out, OK?" Rarity said.

"I'll keep that in mind." Thunder said.

"Is it weird though?" She asked.

"What do you mean?" Thunder asked.

"Well the fact that you are centuries older." Rarity said trying not to be rude.

"Oh, yeah, well it was a thought, but seeing we are both Alicorns now it really doesn't matter." He said laughing. Rarity actually laughed a little to. At which point Twilight walked over.

"What's going on here?" She asked.

"Nothing, Rarity here was interested in how we fell in love." Thunder said laughing again.

"Well I'm going to continue looking at books now, you two behave." Rarity said trotting over back towards Fluttershy. Twilight looked at him and smiled.

"It is later." She said getting on top of him and nuzzling his neck. "And if you tickle me again I will hurt you." She said stern, but teasing at the same time.

"No promises." He said teasing her wings with his. She giggled and leaned in a kissed him again, her wings immediately went stiff.

"You need to learn to control that, you'll poke somepony's eye out." Thunder joked. Twilight's face grew dark red. She went to kiss him, but he moved and went to kiss back, Twilight caught on and moved and tried again, this went back forth for a few moments. Fluttershy looked at them.

"They sure are cute, aren't they?" Rarity said, noticing Fluttershy looking at them. Fluttershy nodded and went back to the book she was reading. At this point Twilight and Thunder had their tongues down each others throat (not literally), Twilight could resist anymore and made a muffled moan in to Thunder's mouth, her wings still stiff as a board.

"Don't forget there are others in the room." Rarity shouted. Twilight pulled back.

"Looks we'll have to wait a little longer." Thunder said somewhat disappointed. Twilight laughed.

"Fine with me, the longer I wait the more you want to, and I can watch you beg me." Twilight whispered seductively in his ear. Thunder wouldn't do that, except just to make things more exciting and Twilight knew that, but she was just trying to tease him and it was working. Thunder acted like he was going to whisper something in her ear, but when he got close he nibbled on the tip of her ear, she expected it, but it still caught her off guard, she made quiet, but high-pitched, squeal and instinctively pushed her head in to him, only giving him better access. He played with her ear for a while, he knew she was enjoying it, but he remembered Rarity and Fluttershy were there.

After an hour or two Fluttershy and Rarity were finished and were heading out, followed by Twilight and Thunder, who had to go get some stuff from the market. Upon splitting off Twilight and Thunder arrived at the market and purchased what they needed.

"That'll be 23 bits, please." The cashier said looking down the whole time.

"Oh right, here." Thunder said handing her the bits.

"Your voice seems familiar. Aren't you.... Oh, my Celestia. Lieutenant and Princess, my pardons, I was working on something else." The cashier said shocked at who was in front of her.

"Pay no mind, I still have yet to get used to the formality and Thunder doesn't care for it, so it's nothing to fuss about." Twilight explained.

"Alright, if you say so, Princess. Have a good day." The cashier said bowing. Twilight looked at Thunder and laughed lightly.

They were on the way home when they were stopped by none other than Rainbow Dash.

"Hey Twi, hey Thunder, what's up?" RD asked.

"Not much, just hanging around." Twilight imitated her.

"Sounds fun. Not to be rude, but what are you doing here, Thunder?" RD asked looking towards him.

"Well, it rained last night and I have fears of flying in the rain and it would take a while to walk, so Twilly offered me a place to sleep." Thunder explained, rather sadly.

"You're scared of the rain? That's weird dude." Rainbow said. Thunder sighed heavily and unfurled his wings.

"Back of the right one." Thunder said blatantly. Twilight got somewhat excited seeing Thunder's wings fully opened, nearly 2 feet wider than Celestia's, as she watched him her wings began to stiffen. Rainbow and Thunder didn't notice. Rainbow saw the deep scar on the back of his wing.

"Oh, I can see why that'ed be a problem. Sorry about that." Rainbow said.

"It's no big deal, lots of ponies know of my fear, but only a handful know why." Thunder explained unusually confident. Thunder and Rainbow looked to Twilight, who was being awful quiet. Rainbow burst in to laughter seeing Twilight's wings.

"What's so funny?" Twilight asked not realizing how stiff her wings were.

"Umm, Twilly." Thunder said, opening his wings. Twilight was confused and looked at her wings only to see them at near full extension.

"Twilight, why do you have a wing-boner?" Rainbow Dash said still on the ground laughing.

"Oh, I, umm, saw Thunder extend his and well, I think you know the rest." Twilight said as her face grew red with embarrassment.

"It's OK, Twilly, first time Celestia did that same thing happened to me. Here." He said walking next to her and wrapping his wing around her, her wings slowly came back down.

"Oh, that's better." Twilight said giggling and resting her head on his shoulder. Dash went from funny to confused.

"Are you two....?" Rainbow said looking at them funny.

"Dating, yes, intimate, not yet." Twilight said looking up at Thunder with her big beautiful eyes.

"Something like that." He chuckled and gave Twilight a soft kiss on the nose.

"OK, awkward, well gotta Dash! See ya!" Rainbow said bolting off.

"Is she...?" Thunder began, but was cut off by Twilight.

` "Weird? Yes, but it's more of a feature than a flaw." Twilight said. "Now let's go, I want you all to myself." Twilight kissed his cheek and lifted her rear leg again. They went back to the library and put the stuff away, afterwards Twilight walked upstairs and laid on the bed.

"Oh, Thunder!" Twilight called out.

"Yeah?" He called back.

"I need some help with something." She told him.

"What is it?" Thunder asked seriously, not knowing what Twilight wanted.

"Come see for yourself." She told him. He walked upstairs, only to see Twilight wearing her sleepwear again, but this time she had bright purple eye-liner on and a small bow in her mane.

"Oh, I see the matter of importance." He said smiling. Twilight patted the bed next to her. Thunder happily obliged. He walked over and laid next to her and she started the session by planting her lips on his, catching him off guard, she rolled him on his back and got on top of him and rubbed his chest firmly. He returned the favor by putting his wings over Twilight, again as her own personal blanket. She laid on his chest and started rubbing his shoulders.

"Foreplay is your strong point isn't it." Thunder teased her.

"Yeah, I like to keep it nice and clean. It's my style." Twilight said nuzzling under his chin, giving him an occasional kiss.

"That's the way I like it as well." Thunder said rubbing Twilight's back.

"When's the last time you were preened, Twilly?" Thunder said seeing Twilight's feathers on her wings were broken or out of place, others were just in need of replacement.

"Oh, I can't do it that often, my wings are extremely ticklish." Twilight said bringing her wings to her side and a blush flourished on her face.

"Well that would be entertaining on my part." Thunder said stroking her wings. She made a giggle when his hooves touched certain points on her wings.

"I tell you what, tell me your most sensitive parts on your wings are and I will try to avoid them or be very gentle." Thunder said sincerely. Twilight knew he was telling the truth, but just to mess with him she disagreed.

"No, if I tell you you'll purposely tickle them." She said with a deviant smile.

"No, I'm serious, I want your wings to be just like you, perfect." Thunder said as nice as he could. Twilight's face turned bright pink.

"Awww, that's sweet. But I'm still not telling you." She teased. Big mistake on her part. Thunder rubbed the middle of both her wings with his. Twilight realized what she did, but it was to late, she tried holding back her laughs, it both tickled and made her aroused.

"You going to tell me yet, sweetie?" Thunder asked, still rubbing her wings. Twilight was actually enjoying it, not only the actual pleasure, but also the attention she was getting.

"No." Was able to say, risking her either to moan or laugh.

"Alright cutie, suit yourself." He said moving his attention from the middle to the base. Twilight couldn't help but give in and collapse on top of him, still somehow managing not to make any sounds. Twilight made another fatal error, when she fell she gave him access to her wings with his hooves. And Thunder took advantage of it. He massaged the base of her wings with his hooves and the tips with his wings. That finally made her crack, she burst out laughing with tears in her eyes, she also made an occasional moan when he hit a certain spot. Twilight begged him to stop, even though she was really enjoying it.

"I love when you beg, it makes you look even cuter." Thunder said trying to make her tell him, but also teasing at the same time.

"I'll never tell you." She said wanting more.

"Alright then." He said. Without warning he dug his muzzle into her neck, making her let out a cry of pleasure. At this point she was kicking her rear hooves and squirming like crazy, but unfortunately he was larger. She couldn't help but letting out high-pitched screams and squeals. She was finally pushed over the edge and started yelling.

"OK! OK! I GIVE UP! I'LL TELL YOU! JUST STOP PLEASE!" She begged. He decided she had enough and didn't want to hurt her, so he stopped. Twilight stopped laughing and just laid on him, breathing extremely heavy, not able to move.

"So are you going to tell me, now?" Thunder asked. Twilight panted heavily, but managed to nod yes. He gave her a minute to rest and nuzzled her neck and chest, as well as rubbing her cutie marks gently. She returned the favor by licking his neck. Once she was energized again a few minutes later.

"Just between you and me, I really enjoyed that." Twilight admitted. "Obviously the base of my wings and the tips are the most sensitive, but my whole wing is sensitive, my right wing a little more than my left." She told him.

"See that wasn't so hard now was it?" He said giving her a firm kiss on the lips. "Now then, get off and lay on your stomach." He told her in a serious tone. She didn't hesitate and complied.

"Can I lay on my side and you can just do one at a time?" She asked sweetly.

"Alright, if it makes you more comfortable." He said nuzzling her neck comforting her. Twilight laid on her left side first.

"Now be careful if you're behind me, cause if you tickle me I might kick you." She said warning him.

"Alright, I will." He said getting on top of her gently and started at the base trying very carefully not to tickle her, but he still hit a sensitive spot once and a while, causing her to squirm or giggle. He continued to remove any broken feathers and fixing any damaged ones. Twilight was sighing and moaning indicating he was doing a good job. He finished that wing and asked her to flip over and she did. He started preening that wing, Twilight wasn't reacting as much because that wing wasn't as sensitive, but she still felt it and was sighing and moaning again. After a few minutes he finished.

"That felt good." Twilight said looking at her newly preened wings. "They look better now than they did when I first got them." Twilight complemented him. He just smiled at the complement. Twilight pushed her muzzle in to his neck.

"What can I do to thank you?" She asked.

"I just want to cuddle with a beautiful purple mare named Twilight." Thunder said. Twilight's eyes grew wide and got a couple tears of happiness and threw her forelegs around him and hugged him tightly. She pulled him down on the bed. Knowing Twilight's favorite position he laid on his left side with his forelegs and wings opened wide, inviting Twilight in to her own personal blanket. She gladly accepted and laid on her left side and pushed herself in to him, he wrapped his forelegs around her and she held his forelegs with hers and rested her head on the inside of his shoulder. She wrapped her rear legs around his. And finally wrapped his large wings around her, covering her almost completely from the top of her cutie mark up to her neck. He finished by pushing his muzzle in to the back of her neck, humming softly sending shivers through her spine. She replied by making soft cooing sounds.

"I love you, Twilight." Thunder said. Twilight was surprised, but she shared the feelings.

"I love you too, Thunder." Twilight said. They were both happy as could be.

"I have to make sure neither of us are dreaming." Thunder said joking.

"OK then, how do you plan to do that?" Twilight asked partly serious, but also playfully.

"Like this." Thunder said simply. He softly nibbled at the back of her neck. She immediately made her usual high-pitched squeal of excitement, but once the initial shock was through she started giggling.

"OK, OK, I don't think neither of us are dreaming." Twilight was able to force out. Thunder just laughed and kissed her again, just soft, firm pecks. She squeaked excitedly at each peck.

"How about this?" Thunder asked as he began blowing lightly on the back of her neck. Twilight responded by laughing. Thunder enjoyed this himself, about as much Twilight was. At this point Twilight got excited and quickly flipped around facing him, but still wrapped in her personal blanket. She looked at him for a few seconds, he took the time to share the affection, staring in to her beautiful purple eyes while she stared at his tough, but soft, dark blue eyes. Before they knew it they were locked in a lust-filled, deep, passionate kiss. Twilight got the jump by poking her tongue at his lips. He felt it and happily allowed her to enter. She moaned lightly and assaulted his mouth with her tongue, poking each tooth individually. Thunder was surprised at her sudden lust. She finished and starting attacking his tongue with hers. He decided to fight back and tried to take control, but Twilight somehow hand the upper hand. Thunder enjoyed that Twilight was dominating him and she did to, but he did just a little more. Twilight finally broke the kiss, panting hard, but light.

"That. Was. Incredible." Twilight said heavily.

"You did most of the work you know." Thunder said giving her a soft kiss.

"Yeah, I suppose I was. Did you enjoy it though?" She asked going from lusty to sweet.

"More than you will ever know." He told her. Twilight blushed.

"OK, now then. I'm tired, so if you can restrain yourself from kissing my neck it would be appreciated." Twilight said turning back in to her original position, Thunders forelegs around her chest and she held his hooves with hers as she rested her head under his shoulder. She rested her rear legs on his as he covered her with his wings. They laid there enjoying the closeness of the moment.

"Good night, Princess." Thunder said to her.

"Good night, Lieutenant." Twilight returned. Moments after the exchange of words they were fast asleep again as the second day of their relationship ended.