The filly with the necklace of death.

by ElectricWaveScratch

Prolouge

It was a sunny day when Electric Wave had done the thing this story is about. Actually,me.

Comments

[bahatumay]

...."had done the thing"?
Maybe try something like this:
"It was a bright, sunny day--much like this one--when Electric Wave committed the atrocities contained in this story.
And when I say Electric Wave, I mean me.

This is my story."