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Wait, how did Dust have nothing stop him from getting from the back of her throat to her eye? Honestly, it would have made a lot more sense if he went into her nasal passages and got sneezed out.
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It's because I didn't think of that when I wrote this chapter. Being sneezed out would've been a cool idea, but I needed a way to have him try and fight back and doing it in her mouth was the best choice I had thought of. Tbh, the eating bit was kinda added last minute, so it didn't really mold with what I had. Whoops
7044517 He still could have done the stuff in her mouth, I'm just saying the whole "getting to her eye and out from the inside by going up the back of her throat" doesn't make sense to me.
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Oh no no, he didn't get to her eye from the inside, he went out her mouth, up the side of her face and went to the outside of her eye. He didn't do all that from within her
7045517 Okay, my bad. I misread nostril as tonsil, making me think he went up to the eye from the inside. My bad.
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It's all good, mistakes happen to us all! Though that would make for an interesting scenario haha!