I'm glad your continuing this story and this chapter is much better then the last one. I don't really see any real major mistakes but I do see couple.

I stretched as my sweat began to cool from my fantic nightmare..

I think you mean frantic because fantic is actually a name of a Motorcycle company.

Now of course I wanted to just pop him once in the mouth breaking it then rip his jaw off and shove it so far up his ass that he it would reattach with shit on it.

I suggest maybe rewriting the sentence. It kinda doesn't really make sense to me.

Those are my only two complaints.Please keep this story going and don't let any negative comments get to you.

Have a good Night.