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4707489 Thanks for the constructive criticism! ^^
I actually didn't think of starting the story in the present and having flashbacks. Though, I believe starting in the past is the best route to go. As for the description, that's gonna describe the entire story when it's finished, and it's gonna be a very, VERY long one. A lot longer than the other one. Also, the second meeting of Celestia and Rhem is going to be different than the first. I don't want to spoil anything, but he may or actually may NOT regain his memory. As for conflict, it will be coming up.
Thank you for your time!
Monty Python lolz
4707666 I agree with your approach of this story, moving from past to present time rather than back and forth with flashbacks. I've seen enough of that in fanfics here.