Dimension Travelers

by Firewind

Chapter 1 - Weird Dream

Dimension Travelers
Chapter 1:
A Weird Dream
By: Firewind
Hey guys thanks for taking the time to read my story. This is my first chapter I wrote. I hope you guys like it and tell me what it would need if you feel like something is missing. If you’re asking where I got this idea, well it just came to me like that. But yeah hope you enjoy!

Firewind

“Wake up man! Wake up!” My vision was blurred for couple of seconds but when it came back, I didn’t like the image I saw. The building I was in was, let’s say, not a building anymore. A building isn’t a building when the walls are almost completely destroyed. I was actually lying on the ground, facing a man. Was he a man? No, scratch that. Horse… with a horn? As I started to regain partial sight, I realized he was also blocky and did have a horn, plus it was glowing? “Probably just my sight,” I thought. “Wake up! Are you alright? That was a big fall you just took! Come on! Get up or else we’ll have another big fall!” It was true, we were in a building, that was probably two hundred stories tall, and we were situated somewhere around the one hundred and thirtieth floor. I got up and looked around me. What I saw were machines surrounding me, some of them had some liquid running through pipes and others had almost a thousand buttons on them with lights indicating errors. But one in particular was standing out from the others. It seemed like a teleporter. I didn’t pay attention to that because my attention was drawn to the fact that we were about to die. I remembered the man or horse-thing that was over me when I woke up. I turned around to see who it was but as soon as I went to turn around, the building started to fall. The shaking of the building sent me flying into the machines that were beside me. But the third time I was flailed around, I didn’t hit any machines. Instead, I started to fall out the window. Falling wasn’t pleasant. Probably because I was falling to my death. My life flashed before my eyes, as I thought about what I could have done better with it. Suddenly, I saw something flying after me. But I didn’t have time to turn around before it hit me…

My waking was brutal. Since I was sleeping in a bunk bed with my research partner, and I have the top one and it’s almost glued to the ceiling, I woke up to find myself hitting my head on the ceiling. Rubbing my head with my hand from the pain, I leaned over to see if my partner is still in bed. But all I saw were his blankets on the floor and the pillow was sitting up on the wall. What in the world did he do last night? Well probably not my business. After a couple minutes, I decided I should probably get out of bed. As we have a lot of things to research. I jumped down and walked out of the door. Our room isn’t the best thing you can have, but also not the worse. It had a bathroom and bunk bed, which are pretty basic essentials. But we also had a window which gave out to a polluted city. It’s not very nice but it’s better than no window at all. And we also had a tiny computer to keep track of everything happening around the world. I walked out of the door to find my co-worker still working on his project. He was currently fixing one of his machine. It’s supposed to be able to teleport through dimensions. I had sometimes thought he was crazy, until the day when he did something no one expected. He managed to open a tiny window, allowing you to see another dimension. We couldn’t make out what was on the other side, but all we know is that the living things on the other side were not humans. The life-forms were more like four legged creatures. I kept saying to myself, “How could he possibly open a portal that could really send people to the unknown dimensions?” He only opened a window so that we can kind of see through it. Not much though. And even though, wouldn’t it be dangerous to send someone in another dimension without knowing if the things living there are hostile? They can even be more intelligent than us! But still, I helped him even if I didn’t entirely agree on his research. But anything to get out from this polluted planet called Earth. It has been hit by several atomic bombs and won’t last for another. We have no winter. It’s always around fifty degrees outside. But thanks god we made a machine that produces cold wind. Or else, we would have to wear nothing, expect underwear’s… But all our machinery aren’t helping, even though we attached about ten fans on each of them, they still produce hot air. But it only lifts the temperature up to twenty degrees. But I had to hurry up in my morning routine. Cause today was not a normal one. We have something special going on today, very special. We were meeting with five more scientists who claimed they made a machine that is supposed to do what our machine is supposed to do. We don’t really believe it, it’s the hardest thing in the world and it acquires a lot of knowledgement on physics. And seeing the world is almost destroyed, schools have shut down, or have been blown up, and no class are giving what so ever. So how can someone know about physics so much? We, of course, are old so we went years ago. But, I think this may be a trap of some sort…

End of Chapter One

I will also try to make a chapter each week depending the appreciation this story get (Follows, likes)

Comments

[bucknorris]

[LucidTech]

Spelling errors in the description, not a good start.

[shira]

Intro has word choice errors... well this won't end well. How about the actual story?

Spelling errors...check. Formatting errors...check. Ginormous wall of text...check. Nonsensical opening...check.

If you didn't care enough about your story to bother to look it over why did you post it?