Good job. I can't wait to see them start their game night and their lives together. This was a good starting chapter, it set up for what is to come and leaves up eager to see what they will do. I am happy this isn't also going to become a mare 6 story (at least I hope) I think the story is much better with just those 3 being together. I can't wait to see some of the other reveals they will have to share,a family game night at Twi's parents while they sneak fooling around with each other lol or one at the castle with Spike's family (Celestia). Not to mention a date to the arcade (maybe some fooling around in a photobooth and teasing each other as they are playing games). There are a tone of interesting things that can happen with this story and I cant wait.
4353338 lol well pinkie is going to lose her shit. The interesting reactions will be rarity and shy. Shy will be happy for dash I would think but rarity might have problems with the relationship. It could be because it is two females and one male and the fact said male is of a different species. But that is if we want that kind of drama. I would enjoy it if it was story with not such heavy drama lol. Just about the ups and downs of their relationship
Well, this is interestin even tho u only just started ; Heh, i did get a chuckle or two out of spike understandable callin his marefriends teases but, at least he handled t risin' problem later . Anyways can't wait to see what happens in t next chappie
4353386 That is true. I think, however, that since they seem to have a herd mentality in this world Rarity won't so much have a problem with two females and a male so much as the male being a different species. I hope she doesn't have such a prejudice but it would make for an interesting conflict. I personally think her initial reaction, she'll faint dead away. Pinkie will most certainly lose her shit spectacularly
4353512 Oh don't worry there will be. Glad to know that this story is getting such a positive reaction like the last one, I look forward to writing this one.
4356445 I am right along with you, there are so many places these story can go and a ton of nerdy,sexy, and nerdy sexy moments that could come out of this great story.
One word: COSPLAY!!! It would be perfect. Rarity loves to make clothes and would probably get a thrill out of dressing herself and the others into (sexy) clothes from various role playing games. Pinkie Pie would find it fun since it would be like playing make believe. And Fluttershy could imagine herself as a brave and bold heroine instead of a shy and timid one. Rainbow Dash could would probably have to egg Applejack into doing it, but I don't think it would take much effort.
4444394 I know, I know I'm working on my other story at the moment, but I promise that after the next chapter I will begn work on the next chapter for this one.
4444572 You could use an editor, but not that bad of a story, to be honest. At least you aren't like some harem writers who can't literally write for shit.
Good job. I can't wait to see them start their game night and their lives together. This was a good starting chapter, it set up for what is to come and leaves up eager to see what they will do. I am happy this isn't also going to become a mare 6 story (at least I hope) I think the story is much better with just those 3 being together. I can't wait to see some of the other reveals they will have to share,a family game night at Twi's parents while they sneak fooling around with each other lol or one at the castle with Spike's family (Celestia). Not to mention a date to the arcade (maybe some fooling around in a photobooth and teasing each other as they are playing games). There are a tone of interesting things that can happen with this story and I cant wait.
4353257 Yeah, no, I said it was going to stay just those two, no adding the others and making a herd. I didn't plan to do that.
Nice! I can't wait to see where this goes. I especially can't wait to see Pinkie's reaction
4353338 lol well pinkie is going to lose her shit. The interesting reactions will be rarity and shy. Shy will be happy for dash I would think but rarity might have problems with the relationship. It could be because it is two females and one male and the fact said male is of a different species. But that is if we want that kind of drama. I would enjoy it if it was story with not such heavy drama lol. Just about the ups and downs of their relationship
Well, this is interestin even tho u only just started ; Heh, i did get a chuckle or two out of spike understandable callin his marefriends teases but, at least he handled t risin' problem later . Anyways can't wait to see what happens in t next chappie
4353386 That is true. I think, however, that since they seem to have a herd mentality in this world Rarity won't so much have a problem with two females and a male so much as the male being a different species. I hope she doesn't have such a prejudice but it would make for an interesting conflict. I personally think her initial reaction, she'll faint dead away. Pinkie will most certainly lose her shit spectacularly
One words
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HUZZAH!
4353512 Oh don't worry there will be. Glad to know that this story is getting such a positive reaction like the last one, I look forward to writing this one.
I am intrigued
4356445 I am right along with you, there are so many places these story can go and a ton of nerdy,sexy, and nerdy sexy moments that could come out of this great story.
One word: COSPLAY!!! It would be perfect. Rarity loves to make clothes and would probably get a thrill out of dressing herself and the others into (sexy) clothes from various role playing games. Pinkie Pie would find it fun since it would be like playing make believe. And Fluttershy could imagine herself as a brave and bold heroine instead of a shy and timid one. Rainbow Dash could would probably have to egg Applejack into doing it, but I don't think it would take much effort.
In the image, it looks like Dash is playing Donkey Kong 64 on a Super Famicom with a Nintendo Entertainment System controller...
4380481 My brain just exploded.
4360373 lol right?
where's chapter 2 you must give us chapter 2 please
4444394 I know, I know I'm working on my other story at the moment, but I promise that after the next chapter I will begn work on the next chapter for this one.
4444572 You could use an editor, but not that bad of a story, to be honest. At least you aren't like some harem writers who can't literally write for shit.
-YNA