Okay I'm not gonna kill you but I was annoyed that you killed Flutters and as for the chapter it was very good.

4364847
now that you mention it I should probably put her name in and Rainbow's wish is coming soon.

4364863
Don't worry everything happening all has a purpose Fluttershy had to die.

4366983 I know I sat through the whole madoka magica series and what all the movies.

4366982 It would be good cause that list was funny and as for the pony I would say Derpy as I seen a madoka magica pony before and Derpy was the pony.

4366985
I saw all the episode but none of the movies.

4366988
Okay.

4367010 There amazing you should watch them better then the normal series is what I say.

4367011 So when you next updating?

4367013
Okay how many are there?

4367021 Two based on the series and one sequel

4367014
I don't know I'll try to finish at least one more chapter this weekend.

4367023 Okay wanted to know as I loved Madoka Magica and even tried to make my own pony version to it but I'm no good.

4367022 Cool I'll watch them some time.
4367025 I actually made this story right after I watched the last episode of the series. And I'm no writing expert either but I'm trying.

4367038 I'm getting somewhere but I still bad and always get harsh comments and the last time I deleted them I got even worst comments.

4367040
I had that problem once I posted a story and no one liked it I started to delete comments and it got worse so i deleted the story.

rule 1. of FimFiction: don't delete comments
2. A lot of people don't like OC stories so if you're making one make it really good
3. People will criticize you one every little wrong thing you'll have to get used to it.
4. always check spelling/grammar errors before you post a story other people will notice (i recommend using Google drive/docs to write the story then post it on here"

4367067 i figured that and I getting some likes...

4367116
You can also submit your stories to the hot muffins submission folder to get more views

4367326 No idea..

4367365
The hot muffin is a group for people who have very little views on there stories

4367410 Nah I prefer to do it my way.

4368258
okay