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Gardian Angle
A.K.A. Joy Gardian. Future and current Artist, Author, Singer/Songwriter, Actriss, and Voice Actriss.
Gardian Angle
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I like it. Very good but one thing you spelled the second piece wrong.
4343154 Thanks for the feedback
4343265 Your welcome and frankly just to mention I'm a horrible writer and have trouble noticing the problems with my writing but can see it in others. Strange huh?
4343268 Yea I know what you mean
If you wanna you can go through my stories and look at them..don't give me very harsh comments but try and help me a bit.
4343293 sure I'll do it now
>4343300 Okay
4343303 from the description they all sound interesting and none interesting at the same time. My recommendation for you is be a little more descriptive in the description but not too much to give the story away and not to little to bore people into not reading it.
4343328 I'm kinda bad at that one...it's either bad or gives it away. I can't do it perfectly.
4343339 that's okay you'll get used to it
This one good but I was a little annoyed when you didn't mention who the pony that almost killed herself or adding in Rainbow's list of wishes.
Okay I'm not gonna kill you but I was annoyed that you killed Flutters and as for the chapter it was very good.
4364847
now that you mention it I should probably put her name in and Rainbow's wish is coming soon.
4364863
Don't worry everything happening all has a purpose Fluttershy had to die.
4366983 I know I sat through the whole madoka magica series and what all the movies.
4366982 It would be good cause that list was funny and as for the pony I would say Derpy as I seen a madoka magica pony before and Derpy was the pony.
4366985
I saw all the episode but none of the movies.
4366988
Okay.
4367010 There amazing you should watch them better then the normal series is what I say.
4367011 So when you next updating?
4367013
Okay how many are there?
4367021 Two based on the series and one sequel
4367014
I don't know I'll try to finish at least one more chapter this weekend.
4367023 Okay wanted to know as I loved Madoka Magica and even tried to make my own pony version to it but I'm no good.
4367022 Cool I'll watch them some time.
4367025 I actually made this story right after I watched the last episode of the series. And I'm no writing expert either but I'm trying.
4367038 I'm getting somewhere but I still bad and always get harsh comments and the last time I deleted them I got even worst comments.
4367040
I had that problem once I posted a story and no one liked it I started to delete comments and it got worse so i deleted the story.
rule 1. of FimFiction: don't delete comments
2. A lot of people don't like OC stories so if you're making one make it really good
3. People will criticize you one every little wrong thing you'll have to get used to it.
4. always check spelling/grammar errors before you post a story other people will notice (i recommend using Google drive/docs to write the story then post it on here"
4367067 i figured that and I getting some likes...
4367116
You can also submit your stories to the hot muffins submission folder to get more views
4367326 No idea..
4367365
The hot muffin is a group for people who have very little views on there stories
4367410 Nah I prefer to do it my way.
4368258
okay
Quite a few mistakes but still interesting. I'm not bullying when saying that as I quite a bad writer like I had before. Loads of spelling mistakes happen to me a lot.
4403953 sorry I finished the chapter from my I pad so I didn't get a chance to do spell cheek on google docs
4404306 Okay it doesn't matter much to me but other may point it out if they read it and I'm making a version of sailor moon using OC's based on them
4404311 cool I'll try to read it when your done
4404362 Cool I'm waiting for the modorations to take it in and place it on the site but it's been about an hour already....
4404410 Well there probably busy with accepting other stories they'll get to yours eventually. It usually takes about a day.
4404423 I just got it and I hadn't put the cross-over tag silly me...
4404608
oh
4411088 By the way when's the next chapter?
4446703 well I'm trying to get this other story plublished at the moment
4448251 Oh take you time then.
4449362 thanks and I really need the time because it failed moderation 3 times
4450037 That gets harsh.
4450219 yea but now it finally passed!
4450997 I saw. It's not really the type of story that I would read though.
4451000 that's okay religion isn't for every one
4451152 I hate religion.