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442812 and now there is THREE paths to choose?
Rainbow Dash
Derpy Hooves
Princess Luna
OH BOY.
442915 Narrow it to two
Luna
Rainbow Dash
i like derpy and the doctor.. just saying.. Otherwise.. this is getting good
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Actually it is still three, it is stated in story that Drako can easily take Derpy back as she still have tons of feeling for him.
442925 NO.. i say two... let the skeletons stay in the closet
UGH.. this cutie mark selection is messed up.. i mean i used it for a plot in one of my stories.. but JEEZ
442937>>442925
I can fix this for you all its Three atm yes but Who the three are you won't know for a few chapters One is Rainbow one is Derpy, As for the Cutie Mark for a plot it is not the main part of the plot only a part of it and not a long one. Trust me there is a big twist in all my stories and you'll all see soon. Also don't forget that this is a Two part Story we got Scootaloo to deal with also
442972 mmh...
why do i have the feeling that celestia is acting like that due to either A. the reasons luna said or B. once drako marries luna he becomes a alicorn, the same thing basicly happends to the ones with a similar destiny only that it never did due to events in the past preventing it
but thats just what i can think of at the moment
now...
tell me was i anywhere near the future story line?
Okay, your story is interesting, but you have A LOT of issues when it comes to grammar and spelling. You really need to proofread your work before putting it up. A lot of this is pretty basic stuff, like comma usage and quotations. A lot of times you just plain misspell things or use the wrong word entirely. Check your work or ask someone to help you check it and this fic will be golden.
Did Celestia just pull off a shotgun wedding
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I do get tired of this kind of Commenting Yes i know about the Grammar and Spelling Problems, i do Proof read my stuff and have someone look them over but my editor is not really good and I'm dyslexic so I tend to miss stuff like that. If you know a good Editor feel free to let me know about them. I am always willing to take help if I can get it.
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Maybe lol but I'm not one to give up the Plot line. I will say that something Deeper is going on here though.
447085 gasp i have the abillity to see the future to some extent!
and now...
i await for moar...
Uuuuuugh, it was going so well!