Heheheh, very well written and I love the second chapter! Twipie

HANDS, FINGERS, WTF MAN???

EDIT: Oh human tag... LOL

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lol, I enjoy humanized clop the most probably, then anthro, then normal.

So what I've been writing so far is humanized

That doesn't mean I won't write "normal" clop in the future

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I swear I didn't even see that coming.

It came out of nowhere, the characters just suddenly became self aware and did that themselves, that was not in the second chapter layout/plan/thing

I guess we'll have to see how it goes from here

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Oh, well I can't wait for your future 'stuffs' to come out then

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Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment. Not many people have the decency to do that.

I won't make excuses, the first chapter is kinda iffy. I'm still relatively new to this kind of writing.

I'll consider a rewrite soon enough, it could be as simple as changing some positions.

Thanks again for the feedback.

Ja...OH JA!!!! MORE, I DEMAND MORE!!!!

Okay, a few issues I have with this:

1. If Twilight has wings and a horn, this isn't really {Human}, is it? It's really more {Anthro}. A case can of course be made for humans with wings and horns, but...generally speaking, having any pony parts whatsoever is usually {Anthro}.

2. I cannot honestly see Pinkie Pie being this much of a slut. Enjoying sex? Yes. Always forgetting to use protection? Probably. Having wild, raunchy sex with a plethora of different men, and never using any protection whatsoever, forcing one of her best friends into the awkward situation of having to clean up after her every single time? No.

3. Taking a pointed alicorn horn up one's pussy would hurt. Especially if you slipped and it went in deeper. The angle of penetration would almost certainly lead to injury.

4. If Pinkie is as much of a slut as you portray her, then her vagina is, by this point, so loose that it wouldn't even NOTICE something as slender as an alicorn's horn.

As much as I love humanized pony sex, and as much fun as reading about Pinkie having sex would and should normally be...I just cannot endorse this story.

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I applaud you for taking the time to leave a comment.

I got flac for labeling a previous story as Anthro because it was just humans with wings and such. So this one I did not label it anthro for that reason.

I'm definitely one of extremes, so Pinkie was a bit far fetched (to put it lightly)

Twilight's horn still looks pretty blunt to me....and who says that alicorn horns are razor sharp anyway?

Yes most definitely. I will further explain in chapters to come of how it's more of a "binge" type behaviour. Do a shit ton, stop, recover, repeat.

Thanks again for the comment, if you are the extra dislike that I noticed then good for you you're one of the only people who's actually had enough decency to leave a comment after downvoting.

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I'm very new to this style....not very experienced yet so forgive me for rather crude scenes.

I'm more sensual and romantic myself so writing this was a bit hard at first.

Thanks for the comment.

WOOHOO Twily likey!! *wolf whistles*