A lovely story! Could have used a little fluff in my opinion, but then again I'm somebody that tends to ramble on about stuff. REGARDLESS at the stories core its quite spectacular! Er...that didn't sound like I thought the writing was bad...did it? Because the writing is good, it just needs to be a tiny bit neater, a little less rushed. I can understand why it was though, people enjoying your stories does kinda put a sort of pressure on you. But yeah, great story!
Also it occurs to me I should at least mention this in once in a while. Love your stories. This was was not as high on the cuteness scale, and a lot more on the sad scale, but it was an excellent read. I was not sure how it was gonna end the entire way through, up to last second I felt it equally likely scoots would go or stay.
One potential thing though, the counselor left the drugs in scoots room while she was off making her life harder?
A lovely story! Could have used a little fluff in my opinion, but then again I'm somebody that tends to ramble on about stuff. REGARDLESS at the stories core its quite spectacular! Er...that didn't sound like I thought the writing was bad...did it? Because the writing is good, it just needs to be a tiny bit neater, a little less rushed. I can understand why it was though, people enjoying your stories does kinda put a sort of pressure on you. But yeah, great story!
Also it occurs to me I should at least mention this in once in a while. Love your stories.
This was was not as high on the cuteness scale, and a lot more on the sad scale, but it was an excellent read. I was not sure how it was gonna end the entire way through, up to last second I felt it equally likely scoots would go or stay.
One potential thing though, the counselor left the drugs in scoots room while she was off making her life harder?
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