Tec, a brony, finds himself in Equestia and must now live in Equestia. He finds out more about himself in the process and learns that things may not always be exactly as they seem.
"By way of answer" You really need to kill that phrase because it sounds bad and really doesn't make sense. Answering was the action itself. The term "by way of" would explain how. So you could answer by way of a hypothetical question, but you can't really state by way of an answer.
4066169 I understood what Lightingace meant, unfortunately I cannot find where I messed it up in the story. I originally started this as a 3rd person but went through and changed it later. The other thing is a typo, along with the fact that I didn't realize how bad it sounded. Thank you for pointing it out.
While the main character borders on Stuishness, the interaction between him, Rainbow, and Pinkie Pie is priceless, and I've seen so few stories that do a good job of giving another character Pinkie's powers.
Okay... One tiny little annoyance on this.
"By way of answer"
You really need to kill that phrase because it sounds bad and really doesn't make sense.
Answering was the action itself. The term "by way of" would explain how. So you could answer by way of a hypothetical question, but you can't really state by way of an answer.
4066169 I understood what Lightingace meant, unfortunately I cannot find where I messed it up in the story. I originally started this as a 3rd person but went through and changed it later. The other thing is a typo, along with the fact that I didn't realize how bad it sounded. Thank you for pointing it out.
While the main character borders on Stuishness, the interaction between him, Rainbow, and Pinkie Pie is priceless, and I've seen so few stories that do a good job of giving another character Pinkie's powers.
Awwww I cried a little
4066169 At last, we meet...brother...