The ponies were celebrating. Pinkie Pie was having one of her famous parties after the defeat of King Sombra. Anypony who was anypony was there, except Twilight Sparkle, who was sitting in a dark corner, her muzzle buried in a book. Twilight was eagerly devouring The History of the Crystal Empire, a long book outlining the customs, history, and geography of the Empire.
“Surprise!!” Pinkie screamed, pulling the book out of Twilight’s grasp.
“GAHHH!” Twilight shrieked. “Pinkie, what are you doing?!” Pinkie Pie gave Twilight a curious look. “Twilight, stop being such a downer-wowner. You’ll attract the Nargles.”
“Nar-what? Oh, never mind. Pinkie, what do you want?”
“Well obviously Twilight, you need to come party, Gummy is about to chug down a bowl of my famous fruit punch, it’s his favorite!” Twilight looked over Pinkie’s shoulder and saw Gummy standing in the punch bowl.
“Pinkie, I don’t really—” Suddenly, Pinkie grabbed Twilight and pulled her on to the dance floor. "PINKIE!" Twilight yelled over the unbelievably loud music. "I really need to learn more about the Crystal Empire, it is imperative that we learn as much as possible about it just to be sure that we are prepared in case any new threats arise!"
"Come on Twilight!" Pinkie sighed "can't you do that tomorrow! It's a party!" Twilight sighed,
"I suppose." and continued to dance with Pinkie.
On the other side of the room, Applejack was selling her "hard apple cider", which was under no circumstances to be given to any younger ponies. The ponies had learned this lesson the hard way, ever since the whole Scootaloo incident.
Rarity sighed dreamily. While it had lasted, the crystal shimmer on her flank had been positively radiant.
The music from the party was deafening. It could be heard from nearly a mile off. But what the ponies didn’t know, was that something was stirring deep in the Everfree forest, something that would change their lives forever.
Twilight changed her mind pretty quickly. Surely Pinkie Pie isn't that persuasive?
3947802 well you see for that part I just squeezed it In so that I could get the story to 1,000 words so I could submit the story. That line was not originally planned. plus I think for the amount of time that twilight has lived in ponyville, she has learned not to argue with pinkie
Arguing with Pinkie you don't really win. She crazy
Well written, but a bit... short.
(yes I know it continues, but wouldn't it be smarter to cluster up the chapters to maybe 1000-7000 words each?)