Not a bad start. Can't wait to see what happens next and FIRST!!!

It's hard for me to think that this is implying Pinkie would be one that doesn't like fillyfoolers......or anypony else for that sake. The persona is just too jarring based on how we all see Pinkie. Same with Rainbow Dash (I know I'm just parroting stereotypes and memes here with her, until at least it shows otherwise.) Applejack let out a bit of an aside when she commented that most of the stallions had disappeared. I think there are more out there rather than Twilight and Fluttershy. And we don't even know if Fluttershy is gay or not. It just shows us that Twilight is, and Spike knows.

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I think there are more out there rather than Twilight and Fluttershy. And we don't even know if Fluttershy is gay or not. It just shows us that Twilight is, and Spike knows.

Twilight and Fluttershy's relationship is long, but stable.

Noooo, I think Fluttershy is gay.

As for this story? Ahhh, read later I guess. Description is pretty short and to the point.

Twilight and Fluttershy's relationship is long, but stable. If their friends found out, they would be outcasts. Equestria needs mares to love stallions, not other mares.

Sounds like it'd be an interesting social experiment, honestly. Looking into the culture of Equestria and their thoughts on relationships. Could do with a bit of... touching up.

Twilight and Fluttershy's relationship has been going for quite a long time, never having hit a bump. Though keeping it a secret from their friends has grown tougher and tougher over the months, they've managed to keep them in the dark.

Love may be powerful, but it can't stand in the face of societal discommunication.

Wordier. Oh God, is it wordier.

3925350 Cheers, mind if i steal that description. i've never been good at making them up :/

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Go for it, just be sure to word it in a way that matches your story's plot.

Blue eyes... Blue eyes... Pinkie Pie?

its Pinkie or Rarity.
or

I hope its Rarity. It would make a better story.