...and the mare on the moon.

The princesses would order after finding out Max was treated badly...

These two things do not mesh.

Is there no one who will be an editor for this? It doesn't release real often.

Loving the story, but that grammar...

I'd do it, but there's no way I'm going to try to edit from a cell phone. -_-

Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.

4216242 The Mare on the moon is apart of Luke's dream.

It makes you wonder if he was a human baby from our world or if hes just the next step in equestrian human evolution, after all he shares many of the traits with the equestrian humans that we don't so either hes a hybrid between earth and equestrian humans or the humans there have been exposed to a mutation thats making them evolve into us... either way this won't end well if he IS a natural born equestian human, maybe one of his parents were from our world? would explain why hes only slightly exposed to things that would kill a normal human of their world.

I am also wondering if this is getting another chapter soon

4410349 Your question will be answered soon. I 'm working on the next ch I am a little more then halfway done with it.

4411732 Thats good to hear, thanks for letting me know

This is a really good story so far...