On this day she was allowne, but I guess it may be as well?

what is this I don't even

'Just seing'
You forgot the second e.

what ever you prfer to call it?

Whatever is one word, prefer has an e missing and the question mark isn't needed here.

On this day she was alone, but I guess it may be as well?

'On this day' is used for announcements not observations, and the second part of the sentence makes no sense, were you possibly going for,
'It was probably just as well'
And it doesn't need a question mark.

I hope English isn't your native language.

Finally got around to checking the first chapter. And not overly too sure what to think of it so far... could recommend getting a browser with a spell-check though, noticed quite a few minor slips in grammar. But anyhow, will try and get through more of this during the week.