This is awesome keep it up

3790872 I'm in the process of finishing the First chapter right now!

this chapter felt incredibly rushed. Slow down okay.

3792150 Will do officer :) I'm not a good writer at all yet so you'll have to see my work progress through out the chapters. This is my very first Fanfic too!

listen just take your time and do some more writing. the thing about writing is, the more you do it the better you get at writing.

Want to watch me write? go ahead and click this link it's my live stream! http://www.twitch.tv/asg16_4

Finally finished the first chapter! and I think i'm going to go after a while xD

3792063 awesome

3794657 Thank you I'm currently working on the 2nd addition to the story you can watch me write it if you go to my live stream VV

3798237 I'm actually not like the person in my fic. I just try to have a different view on this so things like Mary sue won't happen.

3801061 Thanks for letting me know i'll take a look at it and ill also have one of my friends pour over it.

but do you know market is?

know where the market

on why gave you the name

why she gave

but I'm died in my universe and I got sent here!

dead

you that could take a shower

you that you could take

to meet to meet

and I'll doing ANYTHING

do

and waved go bye

goodbye

As you thought about that all you heard

all that

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anon cmon g...you cant handle some horse liquor?