Pain. That's all Link felt as he slowly swam his way back to consciousness. Then, he began to hear the voices.
"That's funny," he thought, slightly bemused. "Sounds pretty active for a so-called 'empty void'."
"He's coming to!" he heard a panicked voice cry. Link cracked his eyes open, only to immediately slam them shut. With a grunt of pain and surprise, he blocked out the bright and glaring light overhead.
"It's ok" he heard a voice say in a quiet, soothing whisper, though Link wondered on whether the comment was addressed to him or the panicked person he heard a moment ago. Link slowly attempted to raise himself but fell back upon the cushions with an anguished cry due to the extreme throbbing pain in his lower abdomen.
"Oh dear," he heard the ever-present voice say "Are you alright?" it asked hesitantly.
Link opened his eyes, slowly, so as to catch a glimpse of this disembodied voice, but what he saw was a strange and curious sight even to him. All around him, in the small room, were white walls and white floors and many rows of white, clean beds, some of which had others lying on them. Link was on top of three beds, but that was not the strangest part. All around him, walking around, and on the beds were PONIES! The ponies appeared to be of all shapes and sizes. Some had wings, others had horns, but a few had neither horns nor wings.
"For the love of Nayru, where am I?!" Link wondered.
"Oh, why, you are currently in the Ponyville Medical Facility." a nervous and subdued voice piped up from next to Link. Link turned to only be greeted by his disembodied voice: a nervous looking tan unicorn in white garb similar to those of the others walking around the room.
"Amazing," Link thought in awe. "This small pony can not only talk, but can also read my mind!"
"No, silly!" the unicorn said with a giggle. "You just keep speaking your thoughts out loud!" Link stopped at this, his eyes wide, feeling greatly puzzled.
"But-" he thought, his lips moving out of pure habit. "I never talk, not since I was a young child."
"Well," the unicorn countered. "You sure can talk now. So tell me, who are you and where are you from?"
"Well," Link replied awkwardly, trying to get a grasp on talking for once. "My name is Link, and I come from a land called Hyrule." Link finished, still marveling at his new found ability of speech.
"Hmm..." the unicorn pondered. "I have never heard of a land called Hyrule, but, then again, I mainly focus on medicine. However, I have a friend who may have heard of it. You stay here and rest while I go and get her." the unicorn said as she quickly exited the room. Link, with nothing else to do, and his wound still hurting him, laid back down upon the soft pillows and fell back into his dreams.
At the Ponyville Library, Twilight Sparkle and her assistant, Spike, were finishing breakfast when a rapid knocking began at the door. With a sigh, Spike got up to go and answer the door, since Twilight was lost in her book as usual. As Spike opened the door, he was greeted by the sight of a very nervous, tan unicorn. She was practically trotting in place. The unicorn, whom Spike had seen on occasion at the Ponyville Medical Facility, was good friends with Twilight.
"Twilight," she cried. "I need your help!"
Also Comments about ideas or what you want to see farther in this story are greatly welcome!
I'd like to see it turn into a romance
3891519 That is an interesting idea but the one question would be "between who?" because at the current moment it is Link as a Human surounded by ponies.
so does the villain look to conquer the world link was sent to after he grows board with his victory? villians always planning things and people will rebel against tyrants so rebel group looking for link?
3891529 well it's link and he always has some kind of contact with royalty soooooo ya mybe Luna or tia or hell cadence it seems like it could work
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That is not a bad idea but hey it all depends but i do have some funny plans for link and the equestrian roralty
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Actually I have a plan to help explain how ganondorf was able to defeat link all it takes is a little dose of chaos whoops looks like i gave a bit of it away
Also the idea of a rebel group in search of Link is not a bad one but remember Ganondorf thinks Link is dead so I doubt there will be much searching also in Ocarina of Time Princess Zelda dissapeared yet no one thought to look for her so who knows maybe Hyrule's Peasants are just mindless or at least spineless fools or at least the majority of them are.
Well I'll be waiting also just being nitpicky but I think the chapters are a bit short
3892377 Yes I feel this way too but i promise to try and make the next ones longer as I myself get more accostomed to the stories flow and the first ones were sort of rushed in an attempt to get this out there. I really wanted it out there in order to start getting solutions and critique as soon as I could but even as i send this i'm working on "Chapter 3: What the Buck?" i only have 3 paragraphs so far but it's slowly coming together.
3892410 that's cool I hope it comes together you got my like
3893164 Awesome and i thank you for it!
3893462 I know that myself and as i said to Hero of time I am working on extending the future chapters for your reading pleasure my main problem is content so suggestions for future chapters are greatly appreciated.
I just remember are you going to change him cause he would cool as a Pegasus
3897121 Welll i haven't quite decided that but even if i did he would HAVE to be a unicorn otherwise how could he weild his sword and other MAGIC weapons though it would be cool if he were a pegasus it just wouldnt be practical. but i suppose the hover boots might allow him to fly
<--- I'm sort of now making this like my signature LOL
3898721 well he could use his mouth for the sword and as for other weapons i seen fics where they use their wings as for magic pegasus have magic in them so he can just will it to work like a unicorn. and if that don't work then Alicorn time!!!
3901068 Hmm that is not a bad idea not a bad one at all especially the Alicorn one with that working there is definitly a chance for romance between link and the royalty but who knows we will see if i decide to make link a pony or keep him a human.
3901171 it's toooo short, way to short. Next chapter should be longer.
3901185 SIGH and there goes another one DOES NO ONE READ PREVIOUS COMMENTS BEFORE POSTING THEIR ONE MY GOLLY GOODNESS IF YOU HAD LOOKED YOU WOULD KNOW THAT I KNOW THIS AND I AM CURRENTLY WORKING ON IT RIGHT NOW AS YOU READ THIS SO STOP STATING THE ^#*&@!#%^@%#&!@ OBVIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!
3901193 it's really good, just mabey combine two chapters together?
3901292 that's not a bad idea sorry for losing my temper it just seems like a ton of people are commenting about story length after i already told some of them why it was like that and it makes me annoyed that i have to restate myself multiple times so yeah sorry.
3901300 there there every thing will be all better
3901833 Thanks Hero appreciate it but too tell you all the truth i really hate feeling pressured and this is new to me the whole people i have never actually met face to face wanting something that only i can give it makes me feel great and nervous at the same time.
3902363 I under stand I have fanfic ideas I would love to do but I don't want to deal with the pressure your more brave then I am at writing
3902408 You know if you want we could work together and get them out there i would be happy to help
3902496 if I decide to ill give your the story idea and u can build off of it that cool?
3903082 Yeah absolutely just send it to me in a private message and I promise to say that the idea came from you!
Oh my goodness I'm not even done with chapter 3 and it is already longer than the other 2 combined (it is currently at 1,410 words according to Microsoft Word) I sure hope you all like not a whole lot is going to happen in it or at least nothing exciting it is more likely to create suspense and make you want to attack me until I get chapter 4 out but oh well I should have it out in about a week from today if editting goes well if not then i will have it out 2 weeks from today at the most I promise
WAIIIIIIT, He could never talk. Dafuq?
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its kinda like when you play pokemon.... you never talk..... or when you play any CoD game or battlefield..... you dont talk..... it like this
"Hey wanna do this job that can kill you but is super cool"
"*mute* ..."
"good i can reley on you m8"
....imagine fallout where you only get dialouge but cant answer em at all