oh god..... i didnt even read it its just so..... i dont want to say bad....but just by the name i hate it why do people have to be so.....heartless? and COLD these are fucking PONIES! NOT FUCKING MURDERERS i have to down rate sir
I have seen way too much HiE, PoE, and fics with just sadness and maybe killing a few non-ponies. Finally, a good slaughter fic... I think I may be a little fucked up.
Honestly. I never take MLP gore fics seriously, including this one. Credit goes for a good writing style but the concept is too silly for me to be shocked.
This deserves to be hailed as one of the few gorefics that actually work. I applaud you. TAKE MY THUMBS. Instantly tracked. Ending ...not suprised, actually. Cannibalshy makes perfect sense considering she wrestles bears and calls it a massage. Let's see... necrophillia, no... don't see an unnatural love of corpses. There's a difference between loving to kill stuff, and loving the dead body left behind. Cannibalism is also not necrophillia. Sweetie Belle...not sure about her. Maybe she does have a freaky love for cadavers.
Edit: Right, after looking, YES you have more downvotes than thumbs right now. That's to be expected with a gorefic. Frankly, you pull it off well enough, so those who downvoted you obviously: 1. Didn't read it, and are trolls. Trolls happen to the best of us. 2. Are on a not-so-righteous crusade to downvote all gorefics. 3. Didn't realize it was gore. Trust me, this happens, people are idiots like that.
In other words, expect that once people get over the initial "OMG GOREFIC. OMG ONE CHAPTER" phase, your thumbs shall skyrocket! Well, the thumbs you receive. Your thumbs need to stay firmly planted on that keyboard as you type the next chapter.
Ah Children. So incredibly uncivil they are. Doing thing for the littlest and sometimes most pointless of motives...
3 and a half paragraphs in and my first thought was "looking for a murder cutie mark..." Since when can sweetie bell use magic? The last bit is what has really caught my attention though.
327967 In the fictional world. A story doesn't always have to be kindhearted and happy. As fics often do, they can portray a variety of emotions, scenes and actions that can potentially cause negative reaction from viewers. Brutal violence is one of them. Seeing it is inevitable. MLP is no exception. If it were, fics like cupcakes wouldn't exist.
I swear my next nights will be spent looking out for anything yellow or white. *hears cracking behind him* AAAHHHHHHHHH!!! help me! helndnijqnncc;qn;qncf;123`]
Hey! A decent gore-fic! So glad I randomly decided to track this!
Boo to people who downrate stories without reading them. This thing is pretty well written, minus a few spelling/grammar errors. If fics like these aren't your cup of tea, then DON'T READ THEM. They have the tags/summaries for a reason, y'know...
328108 We don't know if she can or not, because we've never seen her use magic (just like we've never seen Scootaloo truly fly) so people will be stupid and assume she can't use magic, just like people think Scootaloo can't fly.
And realize that you can just say that your fanfic is a few years in the future and that Sweetie learned magic. Explains how the CMC could have run out of (legal) things to try. In fact, a lot of the things in this chapter seem to allude to the CMC being older. I like that.
*finishes first chapter* I am amazed at how well written this is...I didn't think I could enjoy a gorefic this much...faving, will read the rest later...
Honestly though, There's no real "bad" talents, only bad ways to use it. For example, lets say somepony's talent was killing: There are actually MANY heroic ways for a person to use that, General, monster slayer, ect.
A pony wouldn't have a talent for "being a serial killer"-- that's what you DO with your talent, not what your talent is. They could become a morally good assasin, a spy (staying hidden), or a number of other things, as there talents would most likely revolve around disposing of others and not being caught: and while MLP doesn't touch on it, there are still many evil beings in the world of FIM who need to be opposed, and sometimes, yes, killed.
lets take an example of a character having the talent for creating Fire: they could be a pyromaniac, destroying everything in front of them. OR they could be a Fire mage that fights monsters, they could be someone who works in incinerating waste materials, they could be someone who works at a steam powered factory, ect.
Lets not think of WHAT they've ended up as, but rather what skills they have that lead them to what they were.
First foo!
Ok, now I can read it.
oh god..... i didnt even read it its just so.....
i dont want to say bad....but just by the name i hate it
why do people have to be so.....heartless? and COLD
these are fucking PONIES!
NOT FUCKING MURDERERS
i have to down rate sir
I have seen way too much HiE, PoE, and fics with just sadness and maybe killing a few non-ponies. Finally, a good slaughter fic...
I think I may be a little fucked up.
Honestly. I never take MLP gore fics seriously, including this one. Credit goes for a good writing style but the concept is too silly for me to be shocked.
This deserves to be hailed as one of the few gorefics that actually work. I applaud you. TAKE MY THUMBS.
Instantly tracked. Ending ...not suprised, actually. Cannibalshy makes perfect sense considering she wrestles bears and calls it a massage. Let's see... necrophillia, no... don't see an unnatural love of corpses. There's a difference between loving to kill stuff, and loving the dead body left behind. Cannibalism is also not necrophillia. Sweetie Belle...not sure about her. Maybe she does have a freaky love for cadavers.
Edit: Right, after looking, YES you have more downvotes than thumbs right now. That's to be expected with a gorefic. Frankly, you pull it off well enough, so those who downvoted you obviously:
1. Didn't read it, and are trolls. Trolls happen to the best of us.
2. Are on a not-so-righteous crusade to downvote all gorefics.
3. Didn't realize it was gore. Trust me, this happens, people are idiots like that.
In other words, expect that once people get over the initial "OMG GOREFIC. OMG ONE CHAPTER" phase, your thumbs shall skyrocket! Well, the thumbs you receive. Your thumbs need to stay firmly planted on that keyboard as you type the next chapter.
Ah Children. So incredibly uncivil they are. Doing thing for the littlest and sometimes most pointless of motives...
3 and a half paragraphs in and my first thought was "looking for a murder cutie mark..."
Since when can sweetie bell use magic?
The last bit is what has really caught my attention though.
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In the fictional world. A story doesn't always have to be kindhearted and happy. As fics often do, they can portray a variety of emotions, scenes and actions that can potentially cause negative reaction from viewers. Brutal violence is one of them. Seeing it is inevitable. MLP is no exception. If it were, fics like cupcakes wouldn't exist.
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She can't? Damn... oh well, suspension of disbelief and whatnot
CMC trying to get a murder cutie marks. I love it
Amazing, lord Satan is very much pleased.
A comedy gorefic that's actually taking some time with the concept? Think I'll keep reading, if only for the car-crash quality of it all.
Fluttershy turning up and having designs on the corpse was a nice touch.
I swear my next nights will be spent looking out for anything yellow or white.
*hears cracking behind him*
AAAHHHHHHHHH!!! help me! helndnijqnncc;qn;qncf;123`]
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Hey! A decent gore-fic! So glad I randomly decided to track this!
Boo to people who downrate stories without reading them. This thing is pretty well written, minus a few spelling/grammar errors. If fics like these aren't your cup of tea, then DON'T READ THEM. They have the tags/summaries for a reason, y'know...
Can't wait for the next chapter, keep it up!
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We don't know if she can or not, because we've never seen her use magic (just like we've never seen Scootaloo truly fly) so people will be stupid and assume she can't use magic, just like people think Scootaloo can't fly.
And realize that you can just say that your fanfic is a few years in the future and that Sweetie learned magic. Explains how the CMC could have run out of (legal) things to try. In fact, a lot of the things in this chapter seem to allude to the CMC being older. I like that.
Brilliant, tracked and liked!
Hahaha! OMC that was so funny in a terrifying way. Oh, and Fluttershy's necrophiliac past. Lol.
327967 YOU eat ponies -_- and you should READ a story BEFORE SAYING WHAT YOU THINK OF A STORY!!!! (i WILL sicc DJ on you)
TL;DR ... Thumbs Up!
I only read fics that are exactly long enough to occupy the time I spend taking my morning dump. No more, no less. Still, thumbs.
^ Very insightful.
interesting. Thumbs up for you, good man.
*finishes first chapter* I am amazed at how well written this is...I didn't think I could enjoy a gorefic this much...faving, will read the rest later...
Fluttershy, what did you do?
I-I'm s-sorry.
Oh, never mind, I know it's not CANNIBALISM or anything.
Ah, ha, yes. Yay.
I like murder.
This is quite amusing, I like the concept but I still can't get past the fact that the cmc are murdering other ponies there friggin ponies damnit
Well, I call bullshit on this story. Sweetie can't use magic, gah.
Wait, if there special talent is murdering, why kill Cheerilee? I mean they got silver spoon and Diamond tiara that should of been there targets.
2035252 Excellent point! *flies off; returns moments later, a bloody tiara and glasses in hoof* Well, that just made me feel fan-TAS-tic!
*Reaches final sentence*
"YES, FINALLY! SOMEONE WRITES IN CANNIBAL FLUTTERSHY!"
I have the creepiest manic grin on my face while reading this. HELP ME
Well that escalated quickly.
CUTIE MARK CRUSADER MURDERERS! YAY!
No one else said it yet, I had to.
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psst everything you wrote is in qoutes
if intentional, ignore me