I love this remake!
You are a great person my good sir. Please keep up the epic work.

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Thank you very much.
I enjoyed rewriting it. i had allot of fun and I am glad you loved it.

3690212 I wuv u so much... :P
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(squee)

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It's a bit more intense. Not as "ha ha, sex isn't serious, no one gets hurt" but I guess that's the point you wanted. You made it more "hardcore" in a way but I'm not sure if that was a good thing or not. For those who like seeing females severely injured and need blood in sex, it's good. But for those who like purely fantasy sex it's a jarring change.

3766640 yeah i don't care to see her suffer either. But I wanted to make it more realistic. In the original story it was hit on vaguely that the ritual could prove fatal. And really when you think what the MC did to her it's kinna hard to believe she wouldn't suffer internal injuries.

basically as he said she should have given up hours ago. But she bit off more then she could chew

the injuries do lead into the sequel I wrote myself though.

“Are you not entertained?!??!?!”

*click* noice

Gladiator anyone?