This was very interesting. The only problem I had was that you had either 1: Forgot to add some more words to the sentences so they made more sense, and 2: The words you had placed was changed around with another word that was meant to be something else entirely.
Other than that, this is a great start. Oh! And I love how the Stallions act against each other, reminds me of Applejack and Rainbow Dash
good start.
It's when you get to the stuff in the group i'll start getting critical, though
Good start, I have no idea wats going on but thats the flu talking, but its a good start
I am astonished.
What a great take on the unknown past.
This was very interesting. The only problem I had was that you had either 1: Forgot to add some more words to the sentences so they made more sense, and 2: The words you had placed was changed around with another word that was meant to be something else entirely.
Other than that, this is a great start. Oh! And I love how the Stallions act against each other, reminds me of Applejack and Rainbow Dash