When Daring finds herself centuries in the past, it's up to a young priest to travel through old equestria and get her home.
Another great chapter as usual.In the ending what Skane said was.. unixpected, but funny of how blunt he was being.
Ice and empires
the Pegasai are tired
we she survive the trials
You've got some basic mistakes here. I think you would benefit from an editor.
This answered quite a few questions left in the last chapter. Great job, and keep it up!
3584215*Angry grumble* At least those that read this can appreciate...
Diffidently your best writing yet.Though for me not the most enjoyable.
Hehe, that last part made me think of the movie 'The Dictator'
Also, when I contemplate on the scenario of time travel, perhaps I've been missing out on this story.
Another great chapter as usual.
In the ending what Skane said was.. unixpected, but funny of how blunt he was being.
You've got some basic mistakes here. I think you would benefit from an editor.
This answered quite a few questions left in the last chapter. Great job, and keep it up!
3584215
*Angry grumble* At least those that read this can appreciate...
Diffidently your best writing yet.
Though for me not the most enjoyable.
Hehe, that last part made me think of the movie 'The Dictator'
Also, when I contemplate on the scenario of time travel, perhaps I've been missing out on this story.