309323 I concur

"...Rarity threw together on the fly, fighting against that niggling part of her mind..."
Hehe. Niggling;
Annoying or harrying
A black child

I AM SO RACIST!

Also,
"...I can take it. Ya'll'll only be insulting your own dress." why are there two 'll things? It screwed up my mental pronunciation

Very good story overall, though, great storyline.

310419

As much as it pains me to admit this, I've heard this before and even attempted to use it before mentally kicking myself.

It is a contraction for "you all will" -- ya'll'll

This is pretty good! Onwards to the final chapter! ~ALLONS-Y!~

flutterrage:Lament the Fallen, For the Empress Laments them All!!!!

Got to say the whole conversation along with words pronunciation on Apple jack was well executed to fine point along with this chapter has definitely been an eye popping one for sure that certainly shows a side of Rarity we never expected for a mare of her stature in ways in thinking of her old friend in such a way we might view as unrefined but then again love has the tendency to trike where we least expected it to be.

Why did our lovable element of Generosity have to mention the farm mares Ass has surely had me thinking of this little sample of a sticking point:
fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/269/e/4/southern_rarity_and_applejack_by_tristikov-d4b0r44.jpg Still its all good LOLLLL!!!!

+++++

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"Love the Empress

for She is the salvation of Pony-kind

Obey Her words

for She will lead you into the light of the future,

Heed her wisdom

for She will protect you from Evil

Whisper her prayers with devotion,

for they will save your Soul

Honour Her servants,

for they speak in Her voice

Tremble before Her majesty,

for we all walk in Her immortal shadow."[/b

The use of the word "ass" seemed a little out of place to me, especially coming from Rarity.

Otherwise, again, very good.

309323now go do everything...........i just had to

"I'll just wear the hat, if ya'll still wants me."
I really hope that's an unintentional typo.

310419 Ya'll'll: the combination of ya'll and will much like how the combination of you and all = Ya'll. adding another world that ends in double L's means adding another 'll. ROFL if really is very confusing! it does look very weird, but its proper!