Whip is in for a hell of a ride. Being friends with Rainbow Dash is one thing, but when all her friends have strange feeling feelings for him, it all goes crazy. Join Whip on his adventure and enjoy.
You've got something good going and keep it up, I'm enjoying it so far and I can't wait for more and you remind me a lot of what I did when I wrote my own fic, which is small chapters in big bursts, so keep writing like that and you should be fine.
Great job on the new chapter! Keep up the good work, and take as long as you find necessary!
Ha ha! I wonder what Twilight was reading that made her act in such a fashion.
3664156 If you MUST know.
It was "Fifty Shades of Hay". The MLP version of the real book, "Fifty Shades of Grey"
You've got something good going and keep it up, I'm enjoying it so far and I can't wait for more and you remind me a lot of what I did when I wrote my own fic, which is small chapters in big bursts, so keep writing like that and you should be fine.