White Knight as been working the day shift in the Stormy wing of the Cloudsdale Weather Factory his whole life, the most dangerous and boring job there is. His dream is to join The Royal Guard and be something more, but that might change.
Good story so far. One problem; You placed the same paragraph in there twice.
Several explosions rang out as paint bombs went off with Hestaria still in the middle of the battle fighting her heart out. She turned towards the sounds of the explosions and took flight towards the flag as fast as she could. White Knights heart raced once more as Hestaria stole the flag in her teeth and flew off with the Pegasi.
“Yeah! Go Stari!” White Knight shouted happily before regaining his composure next to his Commander.
“I’m waiting Private.” The Captain said.
“I-I was told to drop munitions on one of my comrades Sir.”
“And you refused? That’s grounds for a court martial. See me in my office at sun set.”
“Y-Yes Sir, Captain.”
“Don’t be late.” the Captain said spreading his mechanical wings and took off back towards the academy
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It's no shorter than the rest. And can you please clarify. I don't know what you mean by. "what with the big wait Hmmm??"
Good story so far. One problem; You placed the same paragraph in there twice.