Hey there, I just thought I'd say thanks for the shout-out in the fic's description! I honestly wasn't expecting that and it made my day, even if that sounds odd. Also, reading the chapter now, I notice that I missed an error or two, and just that makes me feel like a failure as an editor. (crawls into depression-corner and curls into fetal position) Heh, just kidding. Regardless, I DID miss a mistake or two that I should have corrected. I promise I'll do better next time! Your fan, and hopefully still your editor, HallowedGuru
307808 no thank you. Without you I would have even MORE mistakes. I don't expect a flawless story becaus i can't even produce one! I'm just glad that I have someone who likes my work so much that they will take time out of their day to help me. You have no idea what it means to me, to all my fans. Thank you.
307932 You're welcome. You saying that makes me feel great. I love your story and it's great that I get to help you out with it, and I like the feeling of being useful. I look forward to pre-reading and editing future chapters. Let me know if you plan on writing any other stories, because I'll gladly edit and help you out with those too.
This might just be me, rather than an actual problem, but perhaps having a more significant indent at the beginning of each paragraph would be nice. If you don't want to do that, that's okay, but I find it easier to read when the paragraphs are more noticeably separated. Either way, it's a good story. Keep it up.
that was... different![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
Hey there, I just thought I'd say thanks for the shout-out in the fic's description! I honestly wasn't expecting that and it made my day, even if that sounds odd. Also, reading the chapter now, I notice that I missed an error or two, and just that makes me feel like a failure as an editor. (crawls into depression-corner and curls into fetal position) Heh, just kidding. Regardless, I DID miss a mistake or two that I should have corrected. I promise I'll do better next time!
Your fan, and hopefully still your editor,
HallowedGuru
307808 no thank you. Without you I would have even MORE mistakes. I don't expect a flawless story becaus i can't even produce one! I'm just glad that I have someone who likes my work so much that they will take time out of their day to help me. You have no idea what it means to me, to all my fans. Thank you.
307932
You're welcome. You saying that makes me feel great. I love your story and it's great that I get to help you out with it, and I like the feeling of being useful. I look forward to pre-reading and editing future chapters. Let me know if you plan on writing any other stories, because I'll gladly edit and help you out with those too.
This might just be me, rather than an actual problem, but perhaps having a more significant indent at the beginning of each paragraph would be nice. If you don't want to do that, that's okay, but I find it easier to read when the paragraphs are more noticeably separated. Either way, it's a good story. Keep it up.
Hiw i=often do you make new?
*How often do you make new chapeters?
343092 I use to about every other day but this one is taking me a while. Sorry I hope to have it up sometimes this week. Again I apologize.![:ajsleepy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsleepy.png)
You should really pile up the chapters a bit more instead of making them so short. Just a quick tip![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Oh and btw... With the scene coming up... my only reaction is
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This GIF is amazing. How have I never seen it before? Whatever, I'm nabbing it for future use.![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
365354 Already used it on my facebook. Got a shit ton of likes. I used it for a post about the hunger games. btw it was AWESOME![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
365354![:rainbowkiss:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowkiss.png)
Search "dis gon b gud gif" on google images. Its brilliant