You blink. "Wait a second, what do you mean about season?"

Dash peeks her head back down to explain. "Pinkie has her own calendar, marks off certain days and then calls them a season. Don't ask how it works, she'll go on and on about conspiracy theories and such."

This is the best explanation for Random Pinkie-ness ever!
Also, good story! Vivid descriptions and the characters are well done and 3 dimensional. I like it!

Great chapter every bit of it. See you next time

I was kind of expecting him to ask Shining for a hug before he went into the room, honestly. Everyone else is being so nebulous and crazy about this test like all the incest and in-law incest is totally normal. Shining is the only one who seems to somewhat share the main character's feelings, and is sort of a solid and respectable pillar.

is good. could use a bit more time on your choice of words though.

Didn't expect a speech from Shining concerning how he's not going postal on the guy.

oh man, i loved this
cant wait to see how celestia goes about the test or to hear cadance's story

3558689 I'm actually working on the Celestia chapter now, just gotta get the proofreading on Cadance's story (which will be in 3nd pov) If it’s not ready today it will come next weekend.

3558724 awesome cant waait

When will you update this

As soon as the proofreading is done 3583226 , Twisted Curse asked about the same right above

I'm a bit surprised at the Equestria taboo against incest (even if it seems to be only against going "all the way"). They've pretty much institutionalized the closest you can get to incest without it technically happening (sex with your parents-to-be). Having such an objection to the real thing is borderline hypocritical.

You think she is better off not knowing you've been suffering because of her?

But she already does--she knows how much of a problem he has with the being-forced-to-fuck-his-family-to-be-and-be-good-at-it-or-the-marriage-is-off thing.