3318130 Have you read the first chapter of the original story? Redskin used the word muderess. I am writing from his character's point of view. Therefore, I must include his quirks. But thanks for the grammar lesson!
This is an awesome story. My ethical side is screaming at how terrible this is, but my logical side is telling me to look through the eyes of Marcus. When I do so, I start cheering for him in how brutal he's destroying the other ponies.
3518512 Just for that, I decided to unbalance it by liking the story. THAT'S WHAT YOU GET!
And that's how Equestria was destroyed.
murderer isnt masculine and murderess isnt a word
I feel bad that poor good canon Ponies got killed.
Still I like What If scenarios.
By the way everyone. This will be connected to main story.
Hold up for the next chapter. Also be on the look out for a blog by yours truly for a piece of the action.
Will include Inner rage if the author contacts me.
Keep sharp eye out!
3318598 wow...he didn't wait at all. :/
Oh well. I like it.
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Connected? As in a forth universe entering the conflict?
I like the story too, I just feel so bad canon Applejack was killed. It's war, so innocents will be lost.
Hopefully this other Marcus finds the truth out and feels bad about what he did.
3319728 you'll see in the blog.
See you then.
3318130 Have you read the first chapter of the original story? Redskin used the word muderess. I am writing from his character's point of view. Therefore, I must include his quirks. But thanks for the grammar lesson!
Mother of God...the likes and dislikes are balanced now!
This is an awesome story. My ethical side is screaming at how terrible this is, but my logical side is telling me to look through the eyes of Marcus. When I do so, I start cheering for him in how brutal he's destroying the other ponies.
3518512 Just for that, I decided to unbalance it by liking the story. THAT'S WHAT YOU GET!