Chapter 1
Disclaimer: I do not own MLP: FIM or Redwall. Brain Jacques owns the Redwall Series while Lauren Faust created MLP: FIM.
The next morning in Equestria followed. Twilight Sparkle woke up with Spike for once already up before she was. This wasn't normal for Spike to be up before she was. Normally it was her that was getting him up even after he had grown a bit. She then remembered which might've been why he was up. He said he was visited by this mouse in armor warning him that the mouse's home was in danger. She gets out of her bed and walks down "Morning Spike!"
"Morning Princess Twilight" Spike said to Twilight Sparkle.
"Morning Spike" Twilight replied she noticed Spike was looking threw a book "Trying to look for some clues?"
"I am" Spike said "But so far I haven't even seen the one I saw in my dreams in any book."
Twilight Sparkle looks at her number one assistant "How long have you been up?"
"About two hours" Spike answered.
Twilight Sparkle walks up to him "So, what do you say you take a break? Rainbow Dash is visiting, and also so is Princess Celestia. Perhaps you'd like to tell us your dream. Surely if I don't know anything about what your saying in your dream, then Princess Celestia may."
"Sure thing!" Spike said "I was just looking threw them to see if there was anything that could be a clue."
The two make their way outside where Rainbow Dash had been waiting for them "Hey Twilight!"
"Hello Rainbow Dash" Twilight Sparkle responded "Glad you could make it today."
"Are you kidding?" Rainbow Dash asked "I'd love to spend time with any of my friends!" She then notices Spike still troubled "What's wrong with Spike?"
"Hey had a dream last night" Twilight Sparkle explained.
"So did I" Rainbow Dash said "Unless his dream was a nightmare-"
"It wasn't a nightmare" Spike told her "It was more like a warning message. Or a plea for help."
"Now you have me curious" Rainbow Dash admitted "What was the dream?" she turns to Twilight while asking the question.
"I'm not sure" Twilight admitted "Although I was woken up last night when Spike was having his dream. So I believe him."
"So, the meaning of this breakfast, is to find clues?" Rainbow Dash asked.
Twilight Sparkle shakes her head "Yes, Princess Celestia may know what Spike is dreaming about. I don't know what the dream was about but I want to know as well. If if Spike said that the dream was a warning, then we must figure out what the place is."
The three walk towards Canterlot where they immediately meet Princess Celestia. Princess Celestia was a white Alicorn Pony. She was taller then Twilight Sparkle perhaps twice as tall as Twilight Sparkle was. Her mane was a mixture of four colors, the first color was light blue, followed by light green underneath the first color, followed by a another light blue color, and underneath that color was pink. Her tail was also the same color. On Princess Celestia's flank was a sun.
"Good morning Princess Twilight Sparkle" Princess Celestia spoke.
"Morning Princess Celestia" Twilight Sparkle reported.
Princess Celestia leads the other three into the kitchen where the group would have breakfast. Princess Celestia looks at Twilight Sparkle "So anything new going on Princess Twilight?"
Twilight Sparkle answers "Of course, first of all thank you for inviting me, Spike and Rainbow Dash."
"You're welcome" Princess Celestia said.
Twilight Sparkle then turns "Spike had a dream last night."
"Really?" Princess Celestia "What was it about?"
Twilight Sparkle shrugs "I was too tired last night to know what he was dreaming about exactly. So I figured he can explain it here."
The three ponies unanimously agreed Twilight did the right thing. Spike looks at the three ponies then explained his dream "Alright, last night I had a dream, but it wasn't like any other dream before. Where it was a long one. It was short but also it was if whom I dreamed about was asking for help."
Rainbow Dash turns her head "So short but you got the message this pony you dreamed about."
"Yes" Spike admitted he then explains his dream "In my dream, I dreamt of this beautiful red stone castle. Full of peaceful creatures."
The three ponies had their careful eyes and ears open listening to the Dragon. Spike continues "Anyway, this red stone castle seemed very peaceful. Then all of a sudden I saw this dark cloud and you know something, that cloud was so dark that there was no doubt that something evil or dark was approaching the castle."
"That's freaky!" Rainbow Dash kindly interrupted.
"It really is" Twilight admitted.
Princess Celestia agreed, she hated anything that threatened peaceful areas. She eyes Spike "Please continue."
"Of course" Spike responded and he continues "So, continuing on. This dark cloud came over the castle and there was no doubt about what it meant. Next I saw war between the castle's peaceful inhabitants against something dark...Then he appeared."
"He?" the three ponies asked.
Spike nods continuing "This mouse in armor appeared before me. Then he spoke to me these words 'Spike, my home is in grave danger. You and two others must find my home to warn them of the danger and to forefil your destinies."
Spike lets this set in before adding on "And just like that the dream ended."
"Did this mouse in armor say whom was the danger?" Rainbow Dash asked.
"All he said about that it was from something we knew" Spike answered.
Princess Twilight Sparkle was puzzeled "Red stone castle? Princess Celestia, there aren't any red stone castles in Equestria are there?"
Princess Celestia answered standing up "Not one that's been confirmed to even my knowledge. I have however heard of rumors of the said place Spike is talking about."
"You have?" Twilight Sparkle asked her "Yes! I knew you'd know something about Spike's dream if it was real."
"That's the thing" Princess Celestia responded "From what I've heard these are said to be rumors only, not confirmed."
"Then you don't know where it is?" Twilight Sparkle asked.
Princess Celestia stands up "If Spike dreamed of such a beautiful place, and this mouse came to him asking for his help, then that place has to be real."
"What exactly do you know of this Red Stone Castle by the rumors?" Rainbow Dash asked.
Princess Celestia answers "One is, exactly how Spike dreamed of it, it's a Red Stone castle that is a very peaceful place. Peace there is equal to Equestria's peace. Plus there is said that if something is interested in conquering it, the reason maybe that that place has treasure which I highly doubt if there is such a rumored thing."
"Do you by any chance know where this Red Stoned Castle would be?" Spike asked Princess Celestia.
Once more Princess Celestia answers "This Red Stoned Castle should be in what is rumored to be Mossflower Country. Now where that is, not even I know."
Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle hung their heads. Spike also wanted to hang it, Princess Celestia noticed this and spoke "However, if this mouse in armor came to Spike asking for Spike's message, he must find where that Red Stone Castle is and Mossflower Woods. He'll need two others with him."
"I'll go with him" Twilight Sparkle announced "After all I'd like to be the first Pony to discover if the rumored castle is true."
"I'm going with them as well" Rainbow Dash said.
"Rainbow..." Twilight Sparkle began "Why?"
Rainbow Dash answers "You'll need me to help teach you flying, and I can't exactly do it if I'm staying in Ponyville."
"True" Twilight Sparkle said "I wonder if we can get our friends to come with us."
Spike turns to her "I'd love to have them join us but the mouse specially said only two others can join me. Why that is, I don't even know but I'd like to try to keep on the current task he asked me. So you two would help me?"
"Of course" Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle replied "We'd help you out in a heartbeat."
"Thanks" Spike told the two.
Princess Celestia stood up "Then I guess you three on a wonderful journey. I wish you three luck on it, and I'd like to hear every bit of it when or-" she pauses as if she knew the three wouldn't be returning "If you return."
"Why wouldn't we return?" Rainbow Dash asked Princess Celestia "We love Equestria and we'll return back."
Princess Celestia eyes the three "According to Spike's dream, this mouse said something about one's destinies. I have no other idea what destinies lie ahead but I have a hunch that it's something for good."
Twilight Sparkle gets up "Thank you for the info Princess Celestia, well Rainbow Dash, and Spike I guess we should be on our way."
"Let's go!" the two shout with the newest Princess.
The three head off on their journey. Princess Celestia watches the three leave her castle thinking Good luck. I hope you find that place and succeed on your mission Spike.
Dude I'm not trying to be nitpicky but this is soooo full of grammatical error and illogical moments. Celestia said it must be true because he dreamed of a beautiful place and someone asked for help? I can see what you were trying to do but that was really badly executed. You've left out the commas again, and the characters still aren't in character.
Do you need any prereaders or proofreaders? I can help you out with these errors, and it will be soo much better, trust me.
I know there's some erros in here butttt I JUST LOVE THIS STORY!
They have too run in with the long patrol some time they have too.
There also has to be a Skipper there is always a Skipper of otter there.
Also is there Vermin scum in this story
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You guessed it! Skipper of Otters will be in it. There will be a hare in it.
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There could be
But the Changelings will be Redwall's enemy, if there are vermin in there, then the Changelings will enroll those in their army as well.
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If you would like me to help in any way possible such as proof read or help with plot ideas or any thing els let me know it would be a honor to help out in any way.
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Alright. Thanks! Right now I'm trying to start the next chapter, you know how Mr. Jacques always starts off with a short introduction of the Season in Redwall.
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That is another thing that puzzles me but I'm managing. How does he do it? But I'm managing.
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Have a character talking about how the wether is changing and the leafs are changing for different seasons. He does that a lot or how the birds are migrating to the south.
RIP Brian Jacques. I may be too old to really get into his stuff, but I had read at least like 15 of his novels, when I was in my early teens. When I was in Afghanistan is when I learned he passed away.
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Indeed, Brain Jacques wrote quite good stories. And I'll hate to admit it but I will always be a fan of Redwall over MLP: FIM.
May Jacques RIP.
3348695 Nothing wrong with that. I'm sure the Bronies will forgive you. Brian Jacques had a very detailed and enthusiastic tale, and learning things like how he wrote it for blind children is how it's really impressive. I hold Animorphs, Redwall, Kingdom Hearts, Calvin and Hobbes, the Farside and some anime/manga over MLP...Actually, I hold most of the things I like that came before MLP over MLP. but, I may like jelly over peanut butter, but I like it combined better than one alone. MLP is a good established place to bounce other fandoms off of, at least in theory. Lately, it's like bread. It's going well with anything.
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I won't like, MLP: FIM is good for exactly what you said it goes with pretty much anything. I just hope I don't screw up on this one.
On fanfiction. net I have made quite a good fanfic with MLP: FIM and Digimon Tamers. It's one of my best actually the third best fanfic I have wrote on it with currently 162 good reviews and not any that are bad. If you are interested I could provide a link to the fanfic because once it's done on Fanfiction.net if I'm allowed to I may also post it on here as well.
3352540 Aww, I'm honored. Maybe.
Ya wanna know a fanfic I wanna see? A crossover of Fallout and Elder Scrolls. I want to see how the Aldmeri Dominion tries to absorb the American Enclave and Ceaser's Legion, and how the Glorious Tamraelic Empire teams up with the Brotherhood of Steele to fight them off. Like, the Aldmeri dominion would want to absorb them as fighters, but the Legion is so fascist it would have tension with answering to a bunch of equal opportunity magic using non humans. Also, if the Aldmeri Dominion would try to pay off mercenaries like Redgaurd Pirates, Vaas Montenegro's Pirates, Hoyt's Privateers, Dunmer Slavers, Nord Raiders and Orcish Sellswords, not to mention tame the Falmer & Super Mutants/Nightkin/Feral Ghouls, but would the Thalmor be willing to enlist the aid of those they see as beneath them. What would be really scary is if said bad factions started being bad influences to our heroes. The Empire isn't abover corruption, nor the Stormcloaks above racism.
I could see Caeser attracting a lot of Redgaurds and Imperials, but surprisingly only so many orcs and nords. Caeser's legion would be against the human trafficking organisation because it's illegal, but not totally against doing it themselves. Be an interesting story on how the bad guys would try to be united, but have a hard time because intellectuals are trying to lead fascists and private organisations....but, the Aldmeri dominion needs regular soldiers to compensate for thier society of mostly spellcasters, archers, and assassins, so they would get them anyway they can, even through pirate mercenaries and enslaved savages. Sadly, Caeser they may separate, take the side of the good guys as a lesser evil, and now we can't do anything to stop their corrupting influence and make us bad. Caeser would attract the extremists in the Empire of Cyrodill, even if it is about rule of law.
I would also like to see a MLP/Narnia crossover. People keep making references to Spyro or Sonic and that's all fine and good, but what about Narnians and Equestrians making contact with each other? What would a battle be like between the two? Would certain narnians be divided, since they have horses, pegasi, unicorns, donkeys, and ponies of thier own? Would Narnians be easily seduced by some of the sex appeal the ponies can produce (for members that are of the same or similar type). How would their tactics play out on the battlefield.
I wouldn't want to see Aslan and Celestia fight, though. They would actually be watching from the sidelines, drinking tea and then wine, talking about how they teach their followers love and tolerance and they still find a way around it to fight anyway. Celestia would be real depressed, reveal she's Jewish and that like a lot of mythological creatures, she exists because Zues couldn't keep it in his pants. Aslan pours her more wine, he understands. Half of his followers are basically of the same origin and use Narnia as a foster home. That's why they're good but have bad tempers at times.
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Well I haven't seen most of the ones you mentioned but I have seen some of Narnia and agree with you on Celestia and Aslan, I never see Celestia attacking Aslan.
Here is the attachment to my story on Fanfiction.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7908039/1/Digimon-Tamers-Equestria
Uh, if you like what you read, don't be afraid to review it. Fanfiction I accept Fanfiction.Net Signed reviewers and Anonymous Reviewers.
3352540 Only problem is, I was never into Digimon. I did hear that some of the seasons are good, though. Closest thing to Tron, Reboot, and Narnia coming together. I was never interested in the show that much, but I was interested in an gauntlet like hack and slash RPG where you could go about as Digimon with weapons and lvl up. I wanted to play it, even if it got so so reviews. Be neat if the Digimon were semi independant and could learn how to use various weapons to compliment their skills and compensate for their small size (at first). If a fight scene with the Digimon played out less like a video game and more like the Mines of Moria from Lord of the Rings (if it worked).
When it comes to Pokemon, I'd either like to see a PG13 live action movie or anime where Team Rocket isn't above murder, extortion, robbery and terrorism. Also I'd like to see hunters and then the national guard, then the army get in skirmishes with Poke'mon if they suddenly came into our world. Sad, but interesting.
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Hmm, sorry then.
3353868 Didn't say I wouldn't read it. Or at least skim it. I'm open to new things.3288223 Martin the Warrior: "Strike for Redwall, and Equestria!" Oh wow, can you imagine the ponies' battle cry? "Equestriaaaaaa!!!"
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Oh yeah. It would be Equestria for the two ponies and Spike for some time being.
Anyway the story link I gave you will have some story lines that go by the MLP: FIM show only improvised slightly.
3353938 Matthias: "Why am I not hearing the Ghost of Martin? I just keep getting these letters about friendship, it's like a soccer mom rewrote Dale Carnagie's books for kids....Princess Celestia, who's that?"
*meanwhile, halfway across Equestria*
Martin: "Spike. I am that is. Me and your princess have switched places. DON'T LET OWLICIOUS TAKE ME!...cuz, you know, Owls eat mice."
*nicewhile*
Basil: "I say Constance, that Rotten Rabbit is in for jolly old wallopin' if'n he doesn't shape up and act sharp to old Girl Fluttershy, hmm wot wot." *Angel Bunny Slaps Fluttershy* Constance(a Badger, half black and half white): "Oh HELL no! He did not just slap Fluttershy. If he did too much more of this at Salamandastron he'd be slain. Basil, take care of this, please."
Basil: "Righto Ma'arm. Me and the rest of the animals been talkin'. There's plenty what want to whoop his ASS. Heh heh in me Long Patrol days we had a little thing called Redwall to wall counselings wot wot."
*Meanwhile at Sweet Apple Acres, Nashville, Tennessee, Equestria*
AJ meets up with Cluny to hear the terms of surrender. AJ:"Now see here ya crazy varmint, just what's your yabbering about?"
King Cluny: "Dark Claw, give the order to Pukestain to retrieve the terms of surrender from Asswipe so Jackass can read it."
Cptn Jackass: "All property is hereby King Cluny's, all residents of Sweet Apple Acres are now Cluny's slaves, subject to Rule 34-" *AJ bucks him into next summer* "Ah human feathers, y'all varmints shouldn't have picked the Rebel Land to talk smack too. Southern by the Grace of Celestia. YEEE-HAWWW! The South is going to war again AND THIS TIME WE'RE WINNIN'!" *the Apples trample Cluny's horde in a technicolor stampede.* "This is for that poor horse we saw you beat at the beginning of the book."
AppleBloom: "Look Big Sis, I just got my cutie mark for stepping on Cluny!!"
AJ: "Aww, aww Big Mac get a camera. I have never been more proud."
Very Meanwhile
Slagar: "I'll go in and talk to the Fashionista. I'm voiced by Tim Curry, I can put on the charm."
Diamond Dogs and Weasels: "So what's the plan boss, we take over the botique?"
Slagar: "No you dumb dogs and witless weasels. We take her dresses! Mwa ha ha!"
Dogs and weasels: "Ok, then what?" Slagar: "Oh, I mean we take their children. Mwa ha ha! I hope they don't hear us noisily laugh about our evil plan. Mwa ha ha!...Now, we just got to get a hold of that Trixie Bimbo, put a knife to her throat, and goad her into performing a false magic show to lure the children out. I wanted Applebloom. Looks like we'll have to make do with the other so called crusaders. Remember, don't hurt them! We want slaves to sell, not dead meat! Nobody like's broken merchandise."
Father Abbot: "What? Again? That's the second time, I've been BUCKED by people posing as clowns!"
Foremole and Zecora, crying over spilled milk: Mole: "Oi Ma'arm Oi be gurt sorry about en' ee um' pouring your drink into yon pot, thar. I mean't ya know harm and I'd do what I can to fix er' up."
Zecora: "Arts thou mad? Pouring milk into the stew is going to smell very bad! For a mole with good smell, your senses are going to be in a living hell!"
Foremole: "Oi Ma'arm, I don't be understandin' a damn thing your sayin'."
Zecora: "Me neither....It's like we were meant for each other. Your Star shaped nose is so cute, and you remind me of a brother. Kiss me you fool, art thou a tool?"
Foremole: "Oi be mole, and don't you forget it. Me mum wouldn't have none of this, a kiss is just a kiss, but our youngin's be havin' a very hard toim in school alright. By germ, she's got me rhymin' loik some madbeast. Peace out, holla at ya boy, I'm out. B*tches be trippin' Oi reckon."
I already read your other fan fix on fan fiction.net But there's 1 problem there's particular story is not
On there So can you please update the story in the it is 2022 going to be 2023 and this was made 2013I would like to finish reading this entire story thank you