The bombs have just fallen, changing everything, and leaving behind nothing that is familiar nor safe. Faced with new dangers, and with nothing to fall back on, Cirrus Swirl has to try to survive in this harsh new reality that his world has become.
Another great chapter! Love how everything is falling apart, especially the military and the description that everyone is simply 'scared' rings true.
God damn it, the spacing is still bugging me...guess I just got used to all the authors on this site who put an empty line between paragraphs, that going back to the dead tree format is jarring, plus I find it hard to keep track of where I am with close spacing on a back-lit screen. (Also there is the horizontal rule ([ hr] A.K.A.:
3746986 Sorry that the spacing is getting to you! Unfortunately, this is just the format I use for just about all of my writing, and anything else simply looks wrong to me. I like to use the empty line between paragraphs as a break in time or a shift to a different scene, so putting a break between every paragraph would really mess that up.
Another great chapter! Love how everything is falling apart, especially the military and the description that everyone is simply 'scared' rings true.
God damn it, the spacing is still bugging me...guess I just got used to all the authors on this site who put an empty line between paragraphs, that going back to the dead tree format is jarring, plus I find it hard to keep track of where I am with close spacing on a back-lit screen. (Also there is the horizontal rule ([ hr] A.K.A.:
to show separation) /rant
3746986 Sorry that the spacing is getting to you! Unfortunately, this is just the format I use for just about all of my writing, and anything else simply looks wrong to me. I like to use the empty line between paragraphs as a break in time or a shift to a different scene, so putting a break between every paragraph would really mess that up.