I am liking this

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I'm glad you like it x100

Please, continue.
I just want to see them happy now. That'll probably be a few chapters later, but still: any story that makes a reader care for the characters is a good story.

hmmm. i am intrigued. very good thus far.

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Glad you guys are liking it so far

Soooooo, Whens the HiE story comeing?

Niiice. We can feel every character from the show, without even reading there name.

Also, the song and the little picture were a nice touch.

This is great and i can't wait for the next chapter.

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Glad to hear Promise it won't be too long from now!

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I'm actually working on one right now. It's a little hard for me since I haven't really associated with HiE fics before, but I'm trying Promise it won't be too long from now

3227100 If you need help with it ask me I've read a lot of HiE's. And put azena in it that would be epic

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I'll get back to you on that

Uhm... I think in the show they mention that Angel is male. Also you seemed to have switched up Angel's gender yourself in the story. During everything at Fluttershy's place Angel is referred to as female but after your break in scene where she is worrying about what happens at night Angel is referred to as male.

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Ah! Thank you for the info I was so caught up in that too, as to whether or not it was a male.

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Darn, thanks for catching that. I can't believe I missed that during my proof-read. Heck, I wasn't even sure what gender Angel Bunny was in the show.

You should try your hardest to not switch tenses mid-sentence, which I noticed a lot. Keep it in past tense; it's the easiest to stay in.