Wonderful! You really are a great writer! As for the grammar issues, since you're using author's license to imitate Applejack's accent instead of using proper spelling, "ah" can be capitalized or not depending on your preference. However, using the apostrophe in the word "going" instead of the G is a letter replacement, it should be "watch where yer goin'," just like you have been doing it.
Capitalize Ah, and it should be, "Watch where yer goin'." It's because apostrophe is substituting for the "g" and thus is part of the word. If it was a quote inside of a quote, like this, Rarity said, "AJ said, 'Twi said that I was tasting her lip balm,'" then it is like what you described.
3153382 well Daiosharune had already said that capitalizing 'ah' was optional, but then you said that it had to capitalized so now I have two conflicting responses
3144428 what's a authors license, and why is it needed to imitate the accent? Also, ah is lowercase. Not sure where you would get the idea it's uper but it is supposed to be lower. I've spoke that same accent my whole life so it's just common knowledge. As for the last bit you are correct.
3158157 I think by author's license Daiosharune is referring to my ability as the person writing the story, to make changes story's world and everything in it as I see fit. For instance, if a character drops a ball, logic and gravity would indicate that it would fall to the floor, but maybe I don't want that. As the author I get to decide what the ball does at that point, maybe it falls, maybe it explodes, maybe it does nothing, I get the final say and no one but me gets to change that. In terms of 'ah,' what Daiosharune means is that since 'ah' isn't a real word I should get to decide if it is capitalized or not. I hope that helped.
3158157 Anytime an author breaks the standard conventions of spelling, grammar, or other rules/laws (such as physics) to spice up a story, it's commonly referred to as using "author's license". As for the "ah", I didn't say it should be capitalised, I said that the author should use whichever version they feel is most appropriate, since using "ah" instead of "I" is not covered by actual spelling or grammar rules, (as far as I know. Someone let me know if I'm wrong, please!)
3158754 Just one problem, Pinkie pie makes her own physics and logic. As for ah, think of it in the sense as a norm. It's something you really don't think about. It's just always lowercase.
3162243 thank you for the explanation. As for the wording, it's just how I would normally say it. Or think it would be said. Makes sense to me.
Wonderful! You really are a great writer!
As for the grammar issues, since you're using author's license to imitate Applejack's accent instead of using proper spelling, "ah" can be capitalized or not depending on your preference. However, using the apostrophe in the word "going" instead of the G is a letter replacement, it should be "watch where yer goin'," just like you have been doing it.
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Okay, thanks a bunch for the help.
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My pleasure!
Capitalize Ah, and it should be, "Watch where yer goin'." It's because apostrophe is substituting for the "g" and thus is part of the word. If it was a quote inside of a quote, like this, Rarity said, "AJ said, 'Twi said that I was tasting her lip balm,'" then it is like what you described.
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well now I'm just getting mixed messages
Good story these are the story's that make fimfiction so good. So great job keep up the good work. :D
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And these are the comments that make me want to keep writing, thank you!
No problem, keep up the good work you got talent.
I expect to see some JoJo references after reading this chapter.
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You are? I didn't mean to confuse you. If I did, I would just say why pink isn't a color.
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there was already one in the first chaper
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well Daiosharune had already said that capitalizing 'ah' was optional, but then you said that it had to capitalized so now I have two conflicting responses
"*Giggle* Thanks AJ."
*Giggle*
No, dude.
"Thanks AJ," Twilight giggled.
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Well Ah is a substitution word for I, so to me it makes sense to. I also have seen a whole bunch of other fics doing it that way.
3144428 what's a authors license, and why is it needed to imitate the accent? Also, ah is lowercase. Not sure where you would get the idea it's uper but it is supposed to be lower. I've spoke that same accent my whole life so it's just common knowledge. As for the last bit you are correct.
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I think by author's license Daiosharune is referring to my ability as the person writing the story, to make changes story's world and everything in it as I see fit. For instance, if a character drops a ball, logic and gravity would indicate that it would fall to the floor, but maybe I don't want that. As the author I get to decide what the ball does at that point, maybe it falls, maybe it explodes, maybe it does nothing, I get the final say and no one but me gets to change that. In terms of 'ah,' what Daiosharune means is that since 'ah' isn't a real word I should get to decide if it is capitalized or not. I hope that helped.
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Anytime an author breaks the standard conventions of spelling, grammar, or other rules/laws (such as physics) to spice up a story, it's commonly referred to as using "author's license". As for the "ah", I didn't say it should be capitalised, I said that the author should use whichever version they feel is most appropriate, since using "ah" instead of "I" is not covered by actual spelling or grammar rules, (as far as I know. Someone let me know if I'm wrong, please!)
P.S. that should be "what's an author's license".
3158754 Just one problem, Pinkie pie makes her own physics and logic. As for ah, think of it in the sense as a norm. It's something you really don't think about. It's just always lowercase.
3162243 thank you for the explanation. As for the wording, it's just how I would normally say it. Or think it would be said. Makes sense to me.
woohoo! go twijack! even if it is most likely purely physical!
I have one criticism. It's spelt minute, not minuet. Please fix it, it really bugs me.