Alternate storyline to vices and virtues. As you enter equestria as a nineteen year old instead of young boy. Humanized characters.
this started out better than the last time
3920566 thanks
This is interesting. AWESOME!!!
I think your writing has improve. Nice Job.
....Ok,This falls well into 'needs an editor who doesn't like you too much' territory,But at the same time,It has Eris.....And Im a sucker for Eris.....And anyone named Dante for that matter....
this started out better than the last time
3920566 thanks
This is interesting. AWESOME!!!
I think your writing has improve. Nice Job.
....Ok,This falls well into 'needs an editor who doesn't like you too much' territory,But at the same time,It has Eris.....And Im a sucker for Eris.....And anyone named Dante for that matter....