...And then there's the fact that ponies don't eat meat because, y'know, they're herbivores! Oops. But I guess I see the point of why you'd write that, to answer "Where do the animal bodies go?". Anyway, great chapter! Looking forward to more "Adventures with Dexter-pony!"
Yeah that ending kinda sucked. By the time I finished up to there, I realized I had no way to end it, so I whipped up this one. It's all I could think up...
I quite like this, but, oddly enough, the fact that it's not in "pony-speak" (everypony, etc., not using "person") kinda takes me out of it? Which is kind of odd, considering that i'm not, y'know, a pony.
Well written and characterised, even if the plot wasn't up to much. You got me believing that Dexter was actually writing this (or Jeff Lindsay at least), so a well earned 1up from me. As the above people say, I'd love to see some more of this, with a solid plotline akin to the show/books. How does Dexter find victims to fit his code in such a perfect place as Ponyville? Why does no-one call him out on his antisocial behavior? Hope you restart writing this fic, because it certainly deserves it
...And then there's the fact that ponies don't eat meat because, y'know, they're herbivores!
Oops. But I guess I see the point of why you'd write that, to answer "Where do the animal bodies go?". Anyway, great chapter! Looking forward to more "Adventures with Dexter-pony!"
Yeah that ending kinda sucked. By the time I finished up to there, I realized I had no way to end it, so I whipped up this one. It's all I could think up...
I quite like this, but, oddly enough, the fact that it's not in "pony-speak" (everypony, etc., not using "person") kinda takes me out of it? Which is kind of odd, considering that i'm not, y'know, a pony.
Well written and characterised, even if the plot wasn't up to much. You got me believing that Dexter was actually writing this (or Jeff Lindsay at least), so a well earned 1up from me. As the above people say, I'd love to see some more of this, with a solid plotline akin to the show/books. How does Dexter find victims to fit his code in such a perfect place as Ponyville? Why does no-one call him out on his antisocial behavior? Hope you restart writing this fic, because it certainly deserves it
Oh this is so awesome, none of these stories are finished or updated in a long while. I am very dissapointed.