Dexter and his killer adventures in Ponyville
Oh, wow, an update! And a good one, at that.
When I had heard the news of their defeat over Nightmare Moon
That implies they were defeated by Nightmare, not that Nightmare was defeated by them. Try changing it to "victory over Nightmare Moon".
Blah blah blah, please kill meBrilliant XD
Oh, wow, an update! And a good one, at that.
That implies they were defeated by Nightmare, not that Nightmare was defeated by them. Try changing it to "victory over Nightmare Moon".
Blah blah blah, please kill me
Brilliant XD