hmm, this could be for the better (in terms of sex) or it could kill her mentally, I go with for the better

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Whatever you're talking about I agree fully thanks for commenting

3065984 Twilight is going to bring along some... extremely kinky effects to the rest of the equestrians

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Hmm, I don't know, only time will tell...

Uh...I need to go reread the last chapter.

I liked this story at start... could use my imagination how you were writting and have ponies in my mind...... changing it to anthro has lost me.... I hope your story continues well.... but I bid you farewell

Phoenix Skyfire, Signing Off.

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To write a more detailed story, and really push the setting. It is a loss to have switched from ambiguous to just Anthro but it also a big gain for me personally and my ability to create the story I intend. At first I didn't want to alienate the readers of my very first story, but then I also had quality issues. For example the shower scene in chapter 3 would be entirely different in an ambiguous form, since her appendages would be very blandly described as to not push one form over the other as well as there would be less going on. With anthro I get the simplicity of describing a humanoid figure, with the added parts of horns and wings.
Thank you for your comment, I understand that many people do not enjoy Anthro, so it was to be expected.

3082579 I understand what you mean... your story was the first one that you could you all 3 in... and I honestly didnt even look at chapter 3 once i noticed you saying you changed it to Anthro in the Decription... Human... i can partialy stand... Pony Is main thing i read... anthro i refuse to read anymore... i just cant imagine a Pony Morph

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I see, well everyone has the scopes in which they wish to see! Thanks for your time, hope to see you around

3091059 i hope your story goes far... good luck... and happy writting

Think you could maybe change Celestia's quote color into something less... eye-fucky?

“It’s Twilight, she’s in a coma.”

I believe this should be purple, as it is Luna talking, correct?

Enjoying the story and plot in my clop is appreciated. Keep up the good work,