• Published 1st Jul 2013
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The Afterlife Of David Montes - Unforgiving



Sometimes, there can be second chances at life, A good Example is David...

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Prologue

I was brought to a small room, with a window outside, and Blackburn sitting in a chair. Then They made me sit on a chair, while my hands were cuffed, It looked like Interrogation. I sat down in a chair right in front of Backburn, one of my unit's members. Guess they were finally arresting him or something. Either way, I didn't know what was going to happen...



"You saw this man shoot his commanding officer, right?" One of the men spoke

Blackburn just acted like he didn't know, for a very brief amusement

"Just knock off the bullshit, sergeant. Didn't Dima set you up?"

There was a very brief silence

"Didn't he talk you into shooting Cole and then escape to Paris where he triggered the nuke? Wasn't that Dima?"

"Solomon has the Nuke". Said Blackburn

I knew where this was going, although I perfectly knew Solomon Did have the nuke

"Solomon Is one of Ours" Said the Other man

Right before he Continued talking, Blackburn looked at me, Me looking at him, I knew he had an escape plan. It was damn crazy, but It was worth a shot

"He is an overseas asset, and he has been for years. We put him next to Al-Bashir for information."

Blackburn got up, and Raised himself and his voice

"You're shitting me. He's a murderer. You saw the Video" Blackburn said

Another man pushed him back to his seat, handcuffing him in the seat at the same time the other guy explained.

"Well, you get the good with the bad when it comes to assets, and sometimes sacrifices must be made for the greater good"

"Isn't that your angle?" the other guy asked as a tormenting question towards Sergeant Blackburn

"Jesus Christ. The nuke is Still out there. Solomon is still out there. You can't just walk away from the threat!" said Blackburn

"You might be right Sergeant. Maybe Solomon was too close to the fire. But I assure you we're on top of the situation. The russians are a clear and present threat"

The man took his phone, and answered it

"Yes?"

"What do you mean you lost a train?"

They both then walked away, leaving us both sitting here. Blackburn turned his head towards the wall, where maps and photos were placed. Then he took his head towards me

"The train map Inside the bank vault, what was the time written on it?" Asked blackburn to me

"Umm... 6.02, why?" I said

"Dave, you trust me?" Blackburn asked

I pointed out the fact that he called me Dave, but It was just a nick name. Of course, I said

"Oh yeah" While nodding my head

"Alright, Follow my lead" Blackburn said

Then a guard and the same man Both came. Blackburn kicked his foot, and Slammed his forehead to the table, leaving him Knocked out. The guard grabbed me, But blackburn took one of the table's mountings and Slammed him in the head. I took a gun from the guard's Body, and Followed Blackburn. We both ran out of the room, and jumped out of the window before we got shot.

"Aw fuck, Come on Move it!" I said

"The train's coming" I told Blackburn while running towards the Station

I knew I couldn't get in the train, So I shouted

"Get on the fucking train Blackburn. You've got one Shot. Go!"

He ran across the street, and then I saw a train Come. I knew it was obviously it. He then Jumped off the wall, and landed on the train. After that, I didn't see Blackburn...


I proceeded Towards the city, and I found, strangely, a poster of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic at one of the street's corners

Thinking back of How my Daughter loves this... But No matter, I had to help Blackburn In any way. I found a police car, and I had to take it. I actually wasn't chased, weird. I proceeded towards the city with the police car, which that was the next train station.

The train wasn't arriving, and I heard gunshots in the sewers, So I followed the gunshots.

Then I saw him.

I saw Blackburn, that Old crazy bastard, at a sewer exit. I then drove towards him. I pulled over

"Don't ask. Get in!" I said

"Come on, they're getting away!" I seemed to snap him off his tiny trance

Blackburn got up and Got in the police car

"Police scanners are talking about armed men In times Square." I told Blackburn

"It's gotta be the PLR. Buckle Up" I said


I dodged a Lot of cars. It was about 7 Pm, But Damn, still Busy. It was Manhattan After all. Especially Time Square.


We were chasing Solomon, situated in an SUV. Blackburn tried shooting it, What a lousy shot

But then The Van Was blocking more of the way, and we crashed

I was almost flying out of the car because of that crash. At least I didn't. I saw blackburn getting out of the Wreckage, aswell as Solomon

There were people all around us, considering we were in the middle of Town Square


"He's Coming. He's coming, He's Coming!" I said Desperately

Then Solomon waked towards us. And he said

"So, Who dies first?"

I became angered

"YOU'LL NEVER WIN!" I shouted

I saw solomon lift his gun, and Aiming it at my forehead. I noticed a loud bang.

After that, Everything instantly went Black.

I didn't know where I was. Was I lost in my thoughts? I didn't know. But then, I saw A light. A small, light, and I started to walk towards it.



No, I couldn't walk.





When I tried to Get up from my feet, I noticed they would only lift me up only a little




The light slowly became Dimlier, and Dimlier



"No..." I hissed



I knew I had a second chance at afterlife, but it was slowly leaving.



After the Light became So dim, I knew I couldn't reach it in time.



I had lost my Second Chance In life.



After the light went out, Everything was black...


What was going to happen? I don't know. But I knew It was going to be bad




But It wasn't.



then A huge White Hole appeared right in my feet, and I fell



After that, I noticed I was alive, not a wound that I felt.



I slowly opened my eyes...



"What the..." I said, amazed by what I was witnessing by my very own eyes


I saw a green field, with birds flying around and chirping at the same time. I thought was in heaven


I tried to get up, but It seemed I couldn't


When I tried to stand on all fours, it felt like I was already standing. Weird



I looked at my hands, and found I shouldn't use the word 'hands' anymore from my situation.



I was scared to death, knowing I was an animal, and not a human


I tried to walk on all fours, and It worked perfectly.



Well, almost perfectly



there were, obviously a few trips and accidents, but I got the hang of it pretty soon.


I then found a river at my left, and I proceeded towards it to drink some water, since I felt thirsty



But just before I would Drink it, I noticed my Own face was...



A horse


But what icked me the most was that I was smaller than an average horse...


I was a Pony


I widened my eyes, Since It would be extremely embarrasing for someone to look at me


it was extremely out of the ordinary to see a white Brown pony with a Dark brown tail and Hair, or Mane, in other words



But what was the most interesting thing about this new body was that I had a horn.



"A horn? What the fuck?" I said, without noticing, but then I covered my mouth



"I... I can talk? What?"




This couldn't be possible, I was a Pony... a Unicorn pony... That could talk....



No matter, It was Weird as fuck, I know, but I coudn't let myself freak out


I looked at some mountains, hoping to relax my mind off these odd things



But It just made it more Odd



There was a castle hanging on a mountain...



Since There was civilization, there would be people that I may find answers to.



Then I made my way to the castle...