the characterization was pretty good and its definitely a cute pairing. good writeing of drunk as well. i do believe a morning after chapter with happy and adorable mixed with sober sex would be awesome. all in all. quite good. have an upvote

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Oh squee - my first comment, and it's very kind and thoughtful, thank you! I may go back and write a morning after chapter as you suggested (almost did before posting it) with or without the help of flutterdash1. I wasn't sure about the pairing at first, but it grew quickly on me.

Glad you liked it - thank you again for the comment!

2783733 i always comment on awesome. i cant help but think of flutters wakeing up before a.j. and freaking out worrying if it was just alcohol or if a.j. actually cares. could lead to a very careing scene. just tossing that out there.

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Oh yeah - Flutters is happy as she drifts off to sleep in a stupor of pleasure, but the morning will of course start off at least a little awkward.

...but poor Flutters' fears aside, we know AJ is not the type to play with ponies' hearts, so it will all go well.

You've really made me want to add that chapter now! *trots off to ponder it and possibly even write more*

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Hee, yes. Alcohol: lowering inhibitions and causing trouble since... well, since before recorded history!

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Well, Flutterjack isn't a pairing you see too often, so that was definitely a refreshing change. You made it work.

The sex seemed...a bit rushed, but it was good for what it was. It didn't feel like the story ended too soon, which is always a good thing. Very, very nice story. Definitely a fave for me. I'd gladly read another chapter!

Has anybody ever noticed these ponies seem to squirt an amazing amount of liquids when they orgasm? I'm not complaining, mind you; it just gets me thinking...bad thoughts.

This was a cute story. I like that AJ, in her drunken state, is completely misinterpreting Fluttershy's affections and needs to have them practically spelt out for her.
2790791 Dehydration is often a serious problem for Ponyville, if you know what I mean. And bad thoughts are the idea

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Glad you liked it - thanks for taking the time to say so

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I'm glad the pairing and story worked for you! I kind of felt the sex was a bit rushed, too, but it's at least somewhat in keeping with AJ's drunken aggressiveness. And Flutterdash1 and I are indeed working on another chapter, starting with poor Flutters being unsure whether it was all just because AJ was drunk
As for squirting, well, I included it for *ahem* personal reasons and tried to put in a bit of contrast with AJ being at least a bit more subtle. I'm curious what "bad thoughts" this might cause, though!

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Drunken AJ was fun to write around, and I'm a fan of people getting clue-by-fours by various means, so I'm glad you enjoyed! (I love that icon....) And yes, "bad" thoughts are the idea

2792013No problem!

I enjoyed It was my first Appleshy story and now I want more Appleshy!!
I liked the romance in the first chapter but I thought that Fluttershy wouldn't sleep with somepony so quickly.
But I think she and Applejack make an adorable pairing
I definitely think this is one of the most underrated shippings
And you made Applejack a real party animal I love the confidence she exurbanited the entire fic
10/10

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Thanks for the comment! I'm glad this story made you want more AppleShy It did the same for me!
We're working on another chapter (I should change it unfinished!) that will include some "morning after" second thoughts on Fluttershy's part, though that's more because she's concerned that AJ only jumped her because she was drunk
(Spoiler alert: I like happy endings )

Omg I can't wait to see what happenes them the morning after I was hoping to see it at the endof this chap but if it means that there will be another chap then I'm happy.

I noticed it says complete at the bottom of the story will there be a new chapter?

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Thank you so much for your enthusiasm - it tickles the heart
As it turns out there will be another chapter of the morning after. I'm going to change the status to Incomplete in just a moment. Thanks for the reminder!

Her songcoyote thanks man I am so excited to hear that and certainly can't wait to read the new chapter my self I'm sure it will be so awsome. Also that was deep bro it really was either way thnx for a new chapter can't wait to read it!!!!

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Okay this was adorable . I'm also glad to see this is a continuing story and that the clop is the main focus (for the most part anyway). Adding this to the Clop folder in Twilight's library

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So glad you enjoyed it! We weren't sure if we were going to continue the story, but with such a positive response (plus we liked how it came out ) how could we resist?
Plus I really love writing for Fluttershy....

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Hee hee! Glad you enjoyed watching AJ stumble around a bit. She comes through in the end, though... and the morning after will be nice, too (almost finished with the new chapter!)

very passionate. I really enjoyed it

It makes me happy to see that this was written with more in mind, than just porn without plot.