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SongCoyote
An avid reader and occasional writer, editor, and collaborator. A romantic at heart, but with a fiercely practical bent. A roleplayer, stage actress, singer, and generally helpful and loving person
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the characterization was pretty good and its definitely a cute pairing. good writeing of drunk as well. i do believe a morning after chapter with happy and adorable mixed with sober sex would be awesome. all in all. quite good. have an upvote
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Oh squee - my first comment, and it's very kind and thoughtful, thank you! I may go back and write a morning after chapter as you suggested (almost did before posting it) with or without the help of flutterdash1. I wasn't sure about the pairing at first, but it grew quickly on me.
Glad you liked it - thank you again for the comment!
2783733 i always comment on awesome. i cant help but think of flutters wakeing up before a.j. and freaking out worrying if it was just alcohol or if a.j. actually cares. could lead to a very careing scene. just tossing that out there.
I love the drunk ponies. Always so hilarious.
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Oh yeah - Flutters is happy as she drifts off to sleep in a stupor of pleasure, but the morning will of course start off at least a little awkward.
...but poor Flutters' fears aside, we know AJ is not the type to play with ponies' hearts, so it will all go well.
You've really made me want to add that chapter now! *trots off to ponder it and possibly even write more*
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Hee, yes. Alcohol: lowering inhibitions and causing trouble since... well, since before recorded history!
Ha
Me gusta
Well, Flutterjack isn't a pairing you see too often, so that was definitely a refreshing change. You made it work.
The sex seemed...a bit rushed, but it was good for what it was. It didn't feel like the story ended too soon, which is always a good thing. Very, very nice story. Definitely a fave for me. I'd gladly read another chapter!
Has anybody ever noticed these ponies seem to squirt an amazing amount of liquids when they orgasm?
I'm not complaining, mind you; it just gets me thinking...bad thoughts. 
This was a cute story. I like that AJ, in her drunken state, is completely misinterpreting Fluttershy's affections and needs to have them practically spelt out for her.
2790791 Dehydration is often a serious problem for Ponyville, if you know what I mean. And bad thoughts are the idea
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Glad you liked it - thanks for taking the time to say so
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I'm glad the pairing and story worked for you! I kind of felt the sex was a bit rushed, too, but it's at least somewhat in keeping with AJ's drunken aggressiveness. And Flutterdash1 and I are indeed working on another chapter, starting with poor Flutters being unsure whether it was all just because AJ was drunk
As for squirting, well, I included it for *ahem* personal reasons and tried to put in a bit of contrast with AJ being at least a bit more subtle. I'm curious what "bad thoughts" this might cause, though!
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(I love that icon....) And yes, "bad" thoughts are the idea 
Drunken AJ was fun to write around, and I'm a fan of people getting clue-by-fours by various means, so I'm glad you enjoyed!
2792013No problem!
I enjoyed
It was my first Appleshy story
and now I want more Appleshy!!
I love the confidence she exurbanited the entire fic
I liked the romance in the first chapter but I thought that Fluttershy wouldn't sleep with somepony so quickly.
But I think she and Applejack make an adorable pairing
I definitely think this is one of the most underrated shippings
And you made Applejack a real party animal
10/10
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It did the same for me!
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Thanks for the comment! I'm glad this story made you want more AppleShy
We're working on another chapter (I should change it unfinished!) that will include some "morning after" second thoughts on Fluttershy's part, though that's more because she's concerned that AJ only jumped her because she was drunk
(Spoiler alert: I like happy endings
Omg I can't wait to see what happenes them the morning after I was hoping to see it at the endof this chap but if it means that there will be another chap then I'm happy.
I noticed it says complete at the bottom of the story will there be a new chapter?
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Thank you so much for your enthusiasm - it tickles the heart
As it turns out there will be another chapter of the morning after. I'm going to change the status to Incomplete in just a moment. Thanks for the reminder!
Her songcoyote thanks man I am so excited to hear that and certainly can't wait to read the new chapter my self I'm sure it will be so awsome. Also that was deep bro it really was either way thnx for a new chapter can't wait to read it!!!!
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Okay this was adorable
. I'm also glad to see this is a continuing story and that the clop is the main focus (for the most part anyway). Adding this to the Clop folder in Twilight's library 
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) how could we resist?
So glad you enjoyed it! We weren't sure if we were going to continue the story, but with such a positive response (plus we liked how it came out
Plus I really love writing for Fluttershy....
oh AJ
find Flutters, and kiss her, NAOW! 
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Hee hee! Glad you enjoyed watching AJ stumble around a bit. She comes through in the end, though... and the morning after will be nice, too (almost finished with the new chapter!)
very passionate. I really enjoyed it
It makes me happy to see that this was written with more in mind, than just porn without plot.
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I'm really glad you enjoyed it, especially the fact that there was at least a little bit of plot :) Both Flutterdash1 and I tend to like stories with our clop, so that's what we tried to deliver.
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Yay for passion! I feel very strongly, so I'm glad when I can make that come out in a story, especially a co-written one. Thanks for commenting!
To everyone: hope you like the new chapter!
It got a rise from me! (looks down and mumbles with a blush)
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Now that's what I like: some nice, thick praise
Glad you enjoyed the squishy bits!
thank you for this follow up chapter. again,very well played. you'll have to excuse the royal canterlot voice here.
ahem..
HOLY GOD FLUTTERSHY TOPPING A.J!!??!!!
that....that was the most awesome,shy,and cute dmination EVER!!
i hope you,dear author,continue your forays into romantic clop. far superior to flat out clop i personally believe.
now you stay there while i do umm whatever i want is now best line ever.
and now i leave you with the words of the great philosopher Socrates.
" i drank what? "
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This was such a great comment to read - it made me so happy! Thank you! 
Oh squee!
It's especially rewarding because my co-writer and I had a long discussion about that very thing: the challenge of writing Flutters being even playfully toppy. So I'm double glad it worked for you!
Light and laughter,
SongCoyote
2887547i just calls them as i sees them and i see following you now. write on so talentless fucks like me can keep enjoying.
Twas good. Very good.
8 out of 10 mustaches.
2887547 nice I loved it man I would ask u to write another chap but u don't mess with perfection but a sequal might be in the near future maybe?
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Glad you liked it! Not sure about a sequel, though I do have more ideas to write about. Maybe a longer, more involved story (but still with cloppy bits as I love writing those)....
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Thank you kindly! Those mustaches tickle
I must admit to some curiosity as to what I could improve to earn those other two, though. Maybe a PM if you could spare a moment? I like constructive criticism!
2890285 awsome dude thnx
2890285To be an Applejack, I don't know how to PM
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It's easy! At the top of the screen, next to the Browse drop-down, is a little envelope icon. Click that and you'll be taken to the message center, which looks like any ol' e-mail setup. Then click Compose Message, put in the handle of the recipient (I'm SongCoyote) and you're ready to go!
I look forward to hearing from you if you have the time
2887156 I sure did like what you wrote, can't wait to see more from you!
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Thank you very much! This has definitely inspired me to write more. I hope I can keep up the good work
Beautifully well written story. I loved how you kept the fic light hearted even with the sad fluttershy moment in chapters 1 & 2. I would love to see a sequel to this, how do apple jacks family take it? How do they thank rarity and rainbow for helping them? And how do the rest of their friends take them being together?
Overall a well written story, with a nice plot line.
/ 5
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Thank you for your very kind comment! You're not the first to ask about the potential reactions of family and friends... and now that I think on it, continuing this story to become more than just a quick clopfic might be really fun. I'm blushingly pleased that some readers like it enough to request that!
As I've said, this has been a very inspiring experience, and I will definitely write more, possibly with my collaborator on this one (Flutterdash1). Thanks for taking the time to offer some praise - I really appreciate it.
Haha drunken ponies are always best ponies. Look out Flutters AJ is coming for ya !
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Yes, yes she is. In more ways than one!
Glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for dropping by, and especially for taking the time to leave a cheery comment!
Light and laughter,
SongCoyote
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"plot" line? heh...
this was so much fun to read! i love it. keep up the good work!
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read after I commented on your post! And thank you again for taking the time to leave a comment, especially such a happy one. I'll gladly take my lumps when needed but good cheer is always nice.
I'm very glad you liked the story. I'll write more once the holidays are over and the editing and co-writing projects I'm currently working on are complete.
Have a wonderful day and then some!
Light and laughter,
SongCoyote