The world of unstable magic and splitting factions is Pre-Element Equestria, and for Preston, Damien and Matt this world is now theirs...
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*evil snicker* aham~~~ I do remember that some how.
Anyways, like mostly comas are missing, but hey, you managed to add something around 50% of the needed Comas ^^
And like always, the most missing comas are missing in direct speech.
Not bad ^^ nothing else to say.
ow, yes and "Sneaky Discord is sneaky!"