My little Sparkle

by Derpy Rainbow

Chapter 1:Sparkle

I walked down the street to get my mail when i got my mail I never noticed on my way there there was a small cardboard box I looked at the box thinking that it was somebodies mail but when I saw that there was no tape I thought something must be inside it. So i decided to open it and right at that moment when I looked inside my heart exploded it was twilight sparkle she was sleeping then she woke up I looked at her she looked cold so I graved her and took her to my house. I opened my door and i put her on my carpet and i went to get something to eat I graved a apple and a small carrot for twilight I look back p all over my carpet i gave her the carrot and i ate the apple when I was done with the apple i looked at her she was trying to eat the carrot and finally she finshed it. I graved her i put her on the coach i sat with her she looked pretty cold so i graved 1 of my old scarfs and gave it to her I wraped it around her she looked so cute with it on I stared at her for a few minutes and then i turned on the TV iron man was on i watch it for a few minutes then i noticed it was bed time for twilight so i took her up stairs and i put her in my bed and she feel asleep .

Comments

[TheSnarkKnight30]

You know you're reading an awful story when an entire chapter doesn't have any punctuation. This has got to be the worst My Little Dashie wannabe I've ever read. There is no creativity put into this at all.This better be a trollfic. I used to think My Little Dashie was overrated until I read this lousy thing. Iron Man is too awesome to be put in a boring grammarless piece of trash like this. I can't even call this a story. You should be very ashamed of yourself. YOU FAILED!